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All Mighty Terrestrial 2003-08-18 ch 7,	abuseGreat ending! Glad he's finally getting on with his life.
Jade 2003-08-12 ch 7, anon.	abuse::stares intensely at the screen:: sequel! you have to make a sequel, there must be more. you cannot just leave me hanging here! ::sets you infront of the computer:: type away, love! Cheers- Jade
Lea of Mirkwood 2003-08-10 ch 7,	abuseGAH! Other computers cannot do reviews! I hate it! Been trying to review for days, days, I tell you! Brilliant beyond words, you know that? Amazing. Sequel sequel sequel!
shiloh 2003-08-08 ch 7, anon.	abuseo a sequel I would like that very much.
All Mighty Terrestrial 2003-08-02 ch 6,	abuseGreat characterization of The Caller! Accurate in his sympathy and menace, someone close to the edge, and only Kate can bring him back from it, cool his anger. (BTW, didja take the name 'Kate' from 24?) Curious to see how this all turns out.
Zeech 2003-08-02 ch 6,	abuseYes, I was looking at a picture of him the other day...it's one of my favorite Kiefer roles yet. Very nice, very clean-shaven, very dark but extremely good looking. Eh, poor Kate...she seems to be alright with the fact that her boyfriend is a sort of vigalante! They're perfect for eachother! Thanks for the hasty update! ^_^
Zeech 2003-07-31 ch 5,	abuseEEK! (ahahahah, take that Stu!) Wonderful place to end...yikes, you've left me hanging. I like how you've incorporated the events of the movie into the plot. How he just sort of moves on is interesting, but the bit about how the phone booth would be torn down is a nice touch. It's outside his window, something he lives with - and in his own little psycho-cute mind it's a part of his life. Eh. U_U Sad stuff. Well GAH! Is it her?
Lucas Harper 2003-07-31 ch 5,	abuseThis is amazing! Just a great story. I actually found you through a review you left for another story. You actually made the offer of a beta reader to that author, and I was wondering if you'd like to perhaps be mine also. My email address is pocketjericho@homtail.com and I have AIM which is, of course, Pocket Jericho. Thankyou and great story. Jericho..
Lea of Mirkwood 2003-07-30 ch 5,	abuseIs it her?
Zeech 2003-07-29 ch 4,	abuseEh...good lord! What do we call the Caller's game now, Justifiable Torment? I'd say so...I've got a streak in me that sort of lights the fuse of intolerable hatred for sex offenders. ARGH, they make me so..gah.. But I've missed this story, it just gets better and better. I've been deprived, it's been one bad thing after another - black eye, busted lip, sunburn, murderous cramps, bad pain medication and flat tires. But needless to say, this has me feeling better already! Thank you! Some part of me really would like to see this guy knock the fear of God into this Steve creep.
Lea of Mirkwood 2003-07-29 ch 4,	abuseWAH! He must find her! She can save him from himself! I'm still marveling at how you manage to get all this done perfectly without even giving us a name. Your fic is done SO WELL! Do you want a LiveJournal? (thankses for missing me!)
Lea of Mirkwood 2003-07-28 ch 3,	abuseI'M TORN! I want Steve to get what he deserves, but I also want our darling Kiefer to stay slightly on the good side of sane for Kate. I did indeedy have a blast! (LJ update soon all about it) It was so neat to have you pop into the journal and all! Great surprise! I would love to share the Kiefer! Cinesister can't keep him all to herself, now can she? Eh, still wondering if there's an actress you picture as Kate. Could you tell me?
Stony Angel 2003-07-28 ch 3,	abuseWhat's happening here? OMG! I'm dying to see this movie but I didn't have time yet. Anyway, I'm in love with this fic and I have to tell you I can actually hear Sutherland's voice as I read.
Jet-1 2003-07-21 ch 2, anon.	abuseHow touching* A dark suspenceful drama turned into a romance for our bad guy. That's very creative. Are you planning another chapter?, because I think your story should end here.
Zeech 2003-07-14 ch 2,	abuseYeah, my face is red about now U_U I love it, though, I really do. You've got the Caller down pat, and you even know him so well as to be able to perform the unthinkable with him...kudos!

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