Reviews for Pokemon: Origins

Reviews For: Pokemon: Origins

Arisu Tsuranu 2006-09-24 ch 1,	abuseLove it already. lol, high school is gonna kill me...i'm in 8th...HIGH SCHOOL IS MY DOWNFALL! Ok, i'm done, back to reading
tmp1114 2003-11-30 ch 1,	abusei thought you said you going to put up a fanfic that a prequel to this fanfic of pokemon: origins.
Naya Zephronic 2003-11-28 ch 14,	abusevary interesting trying VARY hard to keep a strate face and loseing. badly. HOW kewl! i'm so glad m-two(of of my many nicknames for him) found a purpous(sp?) to bad he lost is sad Omaga's cool! rants on...
Anysia 2003-09-13 ch 14,	abuseapplauding I -finally- found the time to read this, and I'm so glad I did. Very well-written, incredibly realistic, and an overall great fic. I'm assuming that Alpha and Omega's names were intentional? Since Alpha is the first letter of the Greek alphabet and he is the bringer of life, or the beginning, and Omega is the last letter of said alphabet and he is the destroyer of life, or the end, I doubt that such a tremendous coincidence is possible. Major, major props for such a great use of allusion. The action scenes and battles are also very well-written. Not to hold anything against my gender, but I must admit that we femmes pretty much suck at writing action sequences. I don't even attempt them. Excellent work on that count, as well. I was reminded quite a bit of "Pokemon: The First Movie" while reading this fic, which added to the enjoyment. I could easily see this as fitting into the Pokemon canon, and realism is (almost) always a plus. Sorry to make such a long review; I kind of had to summarize my thoughts on fourteen chapters. (The Prof. Ivy ref. in chapter twelve was a stroke of genius, BTW.) goes to read sequel --Anysia
Alex Warlorn 2003-08-03 ch 14,	abuseUgh, I was hoping we could get away without having to endure THEIR presence, oh well, at least they weren't there for long. Way to go MewTwo . . .
Zhen Lin 2003-07-22 ch 14,	abuseA little predictable, but otherwise OK. Perhaps you can reorganise it abit, moving the last few paragraphs from one chapter to the next to create cliffhangers. But there is a little plot-cliffhanger... Without Alpha, who will create more lifeforms? Interesting view of the Alpha and Omega, and how they are two beings, not one as in many religions. Also, their reversed allegiences; most people would have Alpha as the good one.
Alex Warlorn 2003-07-21 ch 13,	abuseWeird twist you had, having the one who created be evil and one who destroyed be good.
Alex Warlorn 2003-07-20 ch 12,	abuseTaking the most forgotten pokemon story point and using it, nice job.
Zhen Lin 2003-07-20 ch 12,	abuse4 chapters at once? You're fast. Storyline progressing to quickly. Slow down. Hang off cliffs.
Zhen Lin 2003-07-17 ch 8,	abuseNone of Alpha's creations can beat him... Are you hinting at the manmade ones? (Mewtwo, Grimer, Muk, Koffing, Weezing, Porygon, Porygon2, Castform, Deoxys) Or perhaps you mean a new Pokemon will be created from scratch?
Alex Warlorn 2003-07-14 ch 5,	abuseI'd say MewTwo if not for the fact he'd sooner experiment on humans than pokemon.
Alex Warlorn 2003-07-13 ch 3,	abuseLooks like to me someone has been playing god with pokemon again. I smell team rocket.
Alex Warlorn 2003-07-13 ch 2,	abuseMy guess is Jirach. The wish granting pokemon. But if you've waited to part three to introduce your star pokemon, then this story must be epic! This could be good!
Alex Warlorn 2003-07-13 ch 1,	abusePersonally I always took in the great Acey's theory. Just as human in our world as animals too. Thus are humans in this world are pokemon too. It's logical when you think about it. Why should humans be the only non-elemental creature on the planet. What was the dream? Heh, Ash in school! Hah ha! That never get boring no matter how many times I read it!

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