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   apie 7/25/03 . chapter 19ah! sorry! i was saving my review for the final chapter but i just read ur note and AH! dont stop writing! ive been readin i promise and i like every bit of it! :D update soon! |
| Arcia 7/23/03 . chapter 17 Samba...! I cant beleive Akane accepted. If Ranma loses, what is she thinking...! Anyway, Great chapter keep it up! |
| Maria 7/22/03 . chapter 17 what! HOW COULD AKANE DO SUCH A THING! i mean even if she thinks ranma hates her she still loves im right? |
| Maria 7/21/03 . chapter 16 oh! nodoka knows marine martial arts! COOL! i thought she specialized in kenpo or kendo? well whatever art with the sword |
| Arcia 7/21/03 . chapter 15 Interesting... I wonder how Ranma's gonna win...If he wins at all I mean... |
| bbb 7/20/03 . chapter 15 thats not a problem for your missing. i couldnt sign in the last four days. thats strange... but your great! two thumbs up!_ b |
| Maria 7/20/03 . chapter 15 NO poor ranma! hey it would be funny if he turned into a girl for some strange reason in front of Samba and also i WANT TO SEE HIS PIONT OF VIEW (RANMAS) |
| Arcia 7/17/03 . chapter 13 Okay... Teenagers are twisted... Glad I'm not one...yet... Anyway great chapter! But... HOW COULD A LIFE VEST NOT WORK! Ranma might half to get up close, probably by swimming under Akane and holding her up... |
| Tyverius 7/17/03 . chapter 1 I can't say I like this type of fic much. I'm not too fond of fics that mainly just repeat the same events (occasionally word-for-word) from the point of view of two different characters. Your writing isn't bad, it's just a matter of personal taste. |
| Siribe-chan 7/17/03 . chapter 13 As a real fan of Ranma fanfics, I must say this story is WONDERFUL! You totally capture the essence of the characters, and your writing is top notch! Ranma and Akane are so cute! Even though they are silly! I hope Akane can learn to swim and they can live happily ever after! And the short chapters are just RADICAL! It's totally cool to be able to read a l'il bite-sized chunk of Ranma 1/2 ficcy fun-ness without getting bored! I really suggest you submit this fic to .com an up and coming new fanfiction magazine. I think A Little Girl's Dream' is exactly the kind of story they are looking for! Bai Bai Siribe-chan |
| Sel 7/16/03 . chapter 10 I really like this story, but it is very repetitious to have Ranma and Akane mostly just repeating the same storyline in each chapter. It would be better if you just "repeated" parts in another POV if there is something critical that the other person is thinking, or if something is missing in the one account of what happens. Other than that, this story is great. Thanks for the quick updates! |
| bandersnatch 7/16/03 . chapter 11 i've been reading your story and i am really starting to like it. your descriptions of things like setting and motion are somewhat lacking, but you strong characterixation goes a long way towards making up for that. ps. my favorite part so far is ranma's pov in the last chapter right at the end where he thought "I wanted to believe in her this once."- that is such a great line. |
| bbb 7/16/03 . chapter 11 Nice to see you here so fast! _ And where is his part? I know I am bad. b |
| Arcia 7/16/03 . chapter 11 Good! Keep it up, I know this might be embarrassing for Akane but...BREAK OUT THE FLOATIES! |
| Velocity River 7/16/03 . chapter 10 Aw Ranma called her pathetic! HOW SAD! |
