Very depressing, which is why I think it's good. now you have another review to gloat over...

The fourth stanza was the best! This was a really great poem, the rhthm (sp?) was perfect.

What a touching poem... it actually made me cry! It was so beautiful... Write MORE!

allo heidi. an here.
dat was an awesum poem! i fink u should do a corespoding poem from another character's pov. it would b great!

u r a very good rhymer! keep up da good stuff!

wonderful poem! dark, intense, well written, with nice flow, rhythm, and rhyme. i like it. and i dis believe that he would return. i like this a lot. good job! keep on writing!

that's so cool but a few lines need changing like you said.pity no one's read it yet