This story is good but like you sead it is a bit out there.

THat was pretty short! if joseph doesn't agree with knives y isn't he helping vash? i dont understand, but i get all the rest

Ack! you're not allowed to quit now! stop worrying already and write 'cause you want to. Sure, reviews help, but it really shouldn't matter that much what we think...except that you know we like you. *smile* Or you should.

you shouldnt doubt yourself, this is a good story and i cant wait for more

More plants=more danger & destruction. Will there be any cities left on Gunsmoke when it's over? I like your characterizations, and I'm very interested in Vash's family...

great chapter once again and thanks for the Meryl/Milly lines. I didn't notice a difference besides Meryl being a little calmer. She's such a spitfire.

so many plots and subterfuges going on here!! Like the idea of more plants walking about too and am glad Kate doesn't have a romantic interest in VAsh... Will there be more emotion from Meryl and Milly?

after Meryl get down that was af lashback right? Since this chapter ended in the middle of the flashback, the next chapter should let people know it's still a flashback else it'll get real confusing when you return to the normal POV where Vash is fighting those men

hey,
that was really good I think you described the plant dying really well but anyway I know how you can use italics. but you have to have microsoft word. write the story how you want (with italics and stuff) they you 'save as' and under the box where you type in what you want to name it and click the down arrow and a list of items will come up click the webpage one and then you will have your italics just upload the webpage that you made then.

I like this and I wish there was more. I'm sry I don't have much to say and i never do.

>^..^

I believe there's a town called november

I thinks it's good! keep on writing

hey it's me ash, that was pretty good. I liked it and I am going to see if there is any more to read great job keep up the good work.