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| Dragonien and Shikamaru 2005-06-29 ch 1, | abuseYAY I LOVE IT YOU MUST MAKE A SEQUAL |
| chibified kitsunes 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abusehiya there! yay, found your story on fanfiction! hope you continue with this fic, i like it! i've already said what i wanted to on the site so yeah~ ja~ keep up the good work |
| sawdust 2003-11-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet! Please write more! |
| af-zero 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. I hope that you plan on continuing this. |
| Ino Pig 2003-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHm...you should have seperated this chapter into a few chapters, that way, it might attract more attention, i think. Hehhee, you haven't update in a while, so im guessing you aren't going to continue this fic? Well, it's a great fic with an amazing plot! hheehe! This story should have way more reviews...well, even though theres a big chance you wont, UPDATE SOON!! And i really mean it, this fic is great!! |
| NeeP 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseAs a reply to Scrawl: Shouya is a figment of my imagination. I got the idea from the second episode of the anime where Naruto teaches Konohamaru his particular jitsu --the part where the boys become 'girls' to do their 'research' in the women's bathhouse. The thief at the end is also a figment of my imagination. More on him if I continue. (After I *complete* one of my other projects.) ^_^ |
| Riyue 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is really well written and planned out, I can't wait for the next chapter. =^-^= |
| Scrawl 2003-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a great story! the ideas and everything were great, and I liked the style of writing. but one thing is confusing me...did you invent Shouya or was she canon? It would have been more helpful if you'd made it clear in the beginning. Other than that, it was one of the best stories I've read on ff.net. You should write more chapters for it! ps: who was the thief that Shouya attacked? was he canon? |
| :D 2003-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuse:D Continue~!! :D ~:D |
| b-chan 2003-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice, that's a very good story. Very well thought out and executed. Congratulations. |
| SirenM 2003-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuse^_^ really can't wait to read the next chapter. they're both so endearing. i like this fic. pls update soon. |
| TJ 2003-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat! The story made me happy! Sequel? |
| Dan Inverse 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abusethis is good write more!! |