Nice fight sequence! XD

Continue writing but change writing format. Such as paragraphs.

Keep going. Use paragraphing to make it easier to follow.

written well. battle sequence clear and concise. write more!

Really good story so far. About time that we got something this good already. hehe. Keep writitng no matter what. Sounds very intersting that jen would want revenge upon her master tweak with the movie alot and change the plot around . GIVE US MORE