Well, well, your note at the last sort of took the fun out of it coz I was imagining a couple of things already at that point.
Good prologue. Havent read much Inuyasha manga but definitely liked this scene. How will Ranma characters fit into it I wonder (speaking of which...what about your other Ranma fic? hope you can write more or at least go on with aforementioned ficcie)...

Nice start. I'm curious to see how Ranma fits in.