This was absolutely great. You MUST update!

One thing though! You really must seperate the scenes with *, because sometimes it's difficult to see where a scene ends and begins, so please, for future reference, make shifts more apparent.

Will definately add the story to my fav.

Wow, a truly awesome story! I just love how you've explained and expanded on the clans and their history with wizards. I love how you mentioned the abuse Harry/Night suffered but didn't dwell upon it other than as an explanation on how he ended up being found by Zywell. I don't think any of Harry/Night's wizard friends or professors will recognise him anymore. Am I right in guessing that both Sirius Black and Severus Snape have some sort of link to the clans and elemental magic through there family.

this story is amazing please update i beg you to please

This is a good story with a lot of twists to the Harry Potter verse. Harry is able to work both Wizard and Elemental magics, but he also has the capability to work other types of magic as well. It would be interesting if he was the one able to bring the two worlds together as they need to in order to defeat evil. I wonder if Harry will find himself a companion in a witch or elemental or a goddess?

ack! NO!! don't finish on a freakin' cliffhanger!!
oh well, at least the sequel's already written :)

that was a very enjoyable read. the only issue in the writing i had was all the names, although i'm really bad with names so that may just be me. incorperating all the stuff about gods and the different types of magic was neat. i'll let you skip the coolness rant.

if you edit this story agian, PLEASE put in page/scene breaks. you obviously linked several scenes together nicely, but without the breaks it sometimes took me a moment to catch on that there was a change. there were also a few places where i think you changed how you wanted to word something, but never fully took out the first way you said it- so you said the same thing (or basically the same thing) twice in a row.

9/10. would be 9.5 if better edited.

anyway, have to go to work now. i'll look forward to starting the sequel on my break :)

damn. i was so excited when i finally saw a page break, and then there was none.
and then there was another one.
and then there was none. again.

if possible, please stick them in, they're more useful than another editing would be, honestly...

oh, and good story so far :)
i'll write a better review at the end.

cool.
bad review, but i had to say it.
onto the next chapter!

oh, and i love tom. excellent idea.

So like Yay, I'm reviewing! Mind you that I'm writing as I read, and what I think at the moment, so what comes out probably won't make sense at all or have nothing to do with the story.

You have been warned!!

Elemental Genesis? Does that mean that he'll have elemental abilitys? I do hope that you won't have lighting as his favorite. For that is so old. Lightning and lightning bolt scar! Do FaSiNaTiNg!! ... _-_,, Not really. As I said, it's old, and way to over used.

Dragonlance? Let it be Huma! I think that's the name of the guy. He befriended a minotaur! Which was awesome!

A Swiftly Tilting Planet? (Searches on Google)..
Ok. Now that I know what that is.. (And gotten myself some Orange juice) I can continue on. I hope that you're not going to base this story on that the reader have the same knowledge as you.

First? Don't worry. There are writers who does good on their first's. Though there is also more experienced ones who totally fails. I think one of the most annoying bummers are grammar and that they answer reviews at the end of the chapters. Which, by the way, I mostly jump over, because I think that the rev answering has nothing to do with the story. So Gnarg.

Indeed, there is always room for improvement.

AU= Alternative Universe. When I first began to read FanFiction I had no idea what that was.

Ok, I'm not one for order. But I feel like a schoolgirl when I watch this. My teacher used to say that it was easyer to read when you let the words have a bit of space.

Wow, I've read that first paragraf, and already I have an angsty spot on my left elbow.

Yup. Destiny and fate has a liking for Mr.Potter. Especially in fanfiction.. ^^

Let me ask, if Harry had been an ordinary teen, wouldn't it be a boring story?

Qoute:
You see, this morose young man was no ordinary teenager, but he was also a wizard. For most of the year he attended Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. There was his true home. His friends were there, as well as the people who actually cared for his well-being. The Dursley residence at number 4 Privet Drive in Surrey wasn’t home, it was hell on Earth.
End Quote.

Wouldn't it have more flow if you re-phrased it into:
You see, this mormose young man was no ordinary teenager, he was a wizard. And for the most of the year he attended Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardy. That was where he (felt most home/ had his true home/something like that). It was through there he had found his first friends, and the people who truly cared for his well-being. The Durslays, on the other hand, was his only blood relatives. and he was bound to stay there atleast once a year. The Dursleys and their residence at number 4 Privet Drive, Surrey was what Harry dubbed Hell.

I know. I have no right to do that, but What the hell, I don't care;)

Orange juice taste good..

Good that you describes in short about Harrys past. Though I think there could hve been more flow into it.. Just saying..

WHY IS POTTER IN Pain?? *Hulk*

*A muscle in cheek twitches*

Death is merciless because if you died, then there would be more story.. Unless the writer wanted to write an after life story...

Hahahaha! Dudley is finally paying!!

*Dries a tear* Aww, Auntie Pet tried to help... That's cute. Vernon on the other hand... *Cracks knockes.. Only to wince when they protests in pain*

HEDWIG!! NO!! *Cries*

*Cold angst filles Auric's body*

DIE VERNON!! NO!! Let Sirius have him! *Chuckles evily as mind gives Auric a good imaginated scene filled with blood and vernon screams*

YES CONTINUE!!

Ps. I know it's rather stupid writing a review now, as you've already gotten so far with the story. But I'm in the mood..
And please refrain from answering the statements or questions I've asked here. most of them(such as why dear Harry was in pain) has, or will be answered. As for the flow thingy, that usually strightnes out as the story unfolds and the author get used to the writing.
Also, I won't promise any more rew's. It's not unusual for me to only give one review.

WAH! what a great story! i'm glad there is more...:D

Amazingly well done. There are, however, a lot of loose ends to tie up and the story still has the feel of plotlines going haywire without closure. I do hope you can reconcile the three worlds that you've created. MASTERFULLY DONE!

Brigadier Aeolus Aether.

Freaking awesome!

About bloody time. +9

Noctem’s fic The False Mage is definitely a good read.
+8!

+7!

Chapters are still too short. Ah well. +6