Wow!That's so beautiful. It's so touching that i think that even i shall cry.Anyway, it was really great and i enjoyed reading it!
Lates!

Nicely written. But I'm a little confused as to who is writing it... Who is Yami Hotoru? I don't recall the Nameless Pharaoh having a lover, and I don't think that Ancient Egypt in Yu-gi-oh had a princess... You'll have to continue and expand upon these things. But the poem's sweet! ^_^