In the final chapter, a MAJOR mistype occurred: instead of a "standing ovation", I had read about a strange phenomenon named "standing ovulation".

This was one of the best story I've read on this site I really can't wait see the next story where Scott masters his powers better and more about his sister Viper.

Wow...I can't believe it is finished. I for real cried when Jake died. It's like he and Wagner never had a chance to truly work things out, but at the same time, they both knew that everything was okay between them. I think it was a good idea to have an unsuccessful mission, that's a little more realistic. I like seeing Wagner more sure of himself...this story was the perfect transistion story from how he was in "Life Shall Come" and how he was in "One More Life" It's totally explains how he's more together and a real stronghold for Cammy. Good job here...and I didn't do anything for you execpt bother you to finish writing a story that I loved reading. Good job!

What a treat for this Friday! Some good chapters you have going on here. Jakes speech was, well, heartwrenching. Everything just seemed to move so quickly I just didn't really have time to grieve (even though I knew he was still alive). You've got some exciting stuff happening here. I'm just left wondering what's going to become of Lisa. I really don't see Wagner being able to fight her...One because Wagner would have a hard time fighting his sister, and two, he's so weak from the malnutrition/torture. Update soon!

Now were getting to the good stuff.

Holy crap! It's like everything that could go wrong, did! I wonder how everything is going to go from here. The American military won't negoiate with terrorists, but 8 soldiers! I just can't get over this. I've never seen Wagner in this situation, I wonder how well his training is going to stay with him or if he'll let his emotions gets the better of him. Good job here, I'm excited to see more, espically now that the real action has begun.

Nice very nice it's about time he started to get the picture. But I wish I had read it all. Now all I can do is wait...

Yay!...what a treat, well not what happened to Wagner, but the update. It's really hard to see Wagner thrown apart like this. I'm used to him being the together one. It's looks as if he was coming back to remember getting in toruble with the police when he was first under Guile care. I hope Guile gives him anothing good talking to like in my fic before. I bet Guile thought he'd never have to bail Wagner out of jail again...that is if Wagner calls Guile and not someone else...could be intresting. Update soon girl...this is starting to move fast, I know Wagner's feelings are leading to someplace...

Very nice story you have here I can't wait to see when he finally starts his search for Bison and how that will come about.

Sorry I've been so long in reviewing, I read this chapter right away, I've just been so busy at school. I really liked this. Sometimes I forget about Wagner having the abilities he has. It's cool to see them getting out of control and such. We have to see him learning to control them somehow. I'm left wondering what he's going to do...Wagner's not the type to just accept hurting a friend like that. Maybe Cammy can help him if he feels like a freak or something. One thing...there does need to be a little more happening in each chapter. It seems like it'll slow the story down, but, it really will get it moving. Good job and update soon.

Holy cow, you updated! Finally! Good chapter but yikes what a nightmare...*insert psycho music*. Update soon!

UPDATE ME! MUST UPDATE SOON...LOSEING POWER TO CATCH AUDIENCES ATTENTION...NEED...NEW...CHAPTER BEFORE TOO...LATE!

Why in the world would General McCall lie to his daughter about Shadowlaw? If she's in the military, it would be responsible of him to inform the soldiers what they're up against, not send them into the field without knowing anything, especially his own daughter!

That's my rant. Good chapter Jami, good character development going on here.

Ooh, Shadowlaws back! Sorry for the lack of reviews, I've been busy as always. Anyway, next chapter.

Hey Jami, just thought I would let you know that I'm rewriting Heart of a Warrior and Heart of a Warrior II. I have Onimusha 3! *jumps around like mad, and eventually calms down* heh, well Onimusha 3 will not be involved. I was wondering if I can use Wagner for the first one-rewritten and better than ever. Email me when you have a chance k's byes! ^^