Reviews for Air Force Legacy
kikoken 4/29/04 . chapter 7
Great chapter. Damn, Bison scares me. Man, scary. *kikoken shivers* Damn psychotic warlord...well anyways I updated Fighter's Destiny! Guess who's in that chapter? Not telling! . Kudoes!
Gone Away 2345 4/15/04 . chapter 6
damn i get to finally review this. great chapter yet again. 77 characters? sweet God of mercy. As long as its not as frighteninly long as lyrix's fanfic, fine by me. I just have to remember everyone...
Could you include my characters? I'll try and get you a profile ASAP but you know me and college too. Even I'm not updating as much.
77 characters aren't that BAD. Ypu just have to know how to pull them off.
Ghostwriter155 4/11/04 . chapter 6
Very Well Written!
Vammy 4/11/04 . chapter 6
NO no no Wagner! You already learned from Cammy not to soak your life in liquor! Good chapter, nice to see this out...finally. ) Could have used some more development, but I sense a longer chapter next, you set up a few good senerios here in this chapter. Good job again!
God A.K.A. The Almighty Father 12/22/03 . chapter 5
Update this story! Now! ASAP! It's been TWO WHOLE MONTHS! This isn't really God (duh), it's Vammy, but please update! I'm missing this fic, and you on the street fighter page. *(
Peachrocks 10/21/03 . chapter 5
O... good stuff as usual Jami...
Gone Away 2345 10/20/03 . chapter 5
Good cliffhanger. it was not crappy, not for me. Continue!
Vammy 10/20/03 . chapter 5
FINALLY! ::cue angelic music and beam of light on the update:: Good chapter. Good job on characterization in here. I really like the development, though Eric seemed to be thrown in there to fill up space (unless he will make another appearance in a flashback or something) Otherwise very good development, espically the introduction of Shadowlaw. Cammy and Wagner had better tell Guile about this.
noctorro 9/25/03 . chapter 4
Very nice friendship you're establishing between Jake and Wagner. One thing I've got trouble getting though, all these other characters - Debbie for example - who are they? Did we have to read the previous story to understand this? I wouldn't be surprised if the answer was yes.
Gone Away 2345 9/16/03 . chapter 4
I think it was alright, I mean even I don't know too much about the military. Great chapter, looking for more!
Vammy 9/15/03 . chapter 4
FINALLY! It's been over a month. I really liked this chapter, and your Air Force info was just fine. Espically the reason Jake was promoted. My best friends husband got promoted to Senior Airman after comming back from Qutar this year.(Execpt they don't really have badges. Wagner would have been demoted, or at worse, discharged.) Everything else was on the money. I like Jake and Wagner's friendship. Good job in developing that in only a short amount of time. And LOL on Cammy kicking Jake 'where the sun don't shine'. Wonder why she did that? Update sooner girl. This is great, but the chapters are so far apart.
Edgar 8/9/03 . chapter 3
Cool story,Jami,if you want put Mason Storm as a special guest star in your fic,(MASON ROCKS ANS WAGNER SUCKS!)LOL!just kidding Jami,update soon,JA NE!
noctorro 8/9/03 . chapter 3
I liked this chapter, I really did - although not for the reasons that I usually like chapters. It was nice to see a little reference to "Life Shall Come" which in turn refers to "Other Worlds" and vice versa. Am I the only one getting a kick outta this?
Vammy 8/7/03 . chapter 3
I was having flashbacks there for a second. I just had to quit my job for school, so it was nice I guess. Sorry I was so long in reviewing. Haven't gotten my computer hooked up in my dorm room, so right now I'm in the libary. Great chapter. Lots of characters introduced, it's intresting. I can't wait to see what happens next, I will check as soon as I have time again. Later!
Lyrix of Azn Ethix 8/7/03 . chapter 3
Nice chapter. Yeah, Bison is such a damn bastard.
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