i like the storie so far, but it is hard and sometimes confusing to read the sentences without the "..." It would read a lot easier if you would fix that.

First few chapters i've read a ok, But theres no Quotation marks to indicate Talking...Which is really ** confusing. You might want to Edit it

Well, considering the last update was in 2004, it's a shame to think we will probably never see the end of this fanfic. I really enjoyed it, and would love it if you'd write some more ;)

love the ideas and i really like the way Harry is written. I want to know if i am abpe to use your idea for a guardian like Dumbledore's gargoyls in my future stories?

I'm too tired to write the word PLease 1,470 times tinight, so just please update. It would do anyone who's read this story an immense favor and give you many reviews.

I really like your story please continue (gives author puppy dog eyes)

update soon

its really really good!

Hay your story is good and with a different angle, I like. The only thing I want to ask is if you can put in speachmarks? It's kind of hard to tell when you have a chracter speeking and it was confused me. Loved the story tho.

I have never laughed so much, and fyi i have all books so it you need any information you don't have just PM i will check them and let you know the Harry Potter Lexicon(google it) has all information regarding Potter Universe that is according to JK Rawling not her fans
Pomona Sprout real name lol

Hope this helps u

This is a really good story- please finish it!

Great story, please continue

Interesting, you have a great concept, though it seems a little too choppy; as though it's a little to fast paced and you have left something unsaid. For a prologue though, this seems alright and leaves the readers questions to continue reading. Nice work, though the " marks before words don't seem to come up. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.

Great story are you going to continue it?

love the story a lot but i see u haven't updated in a while. Is this the end? No finish of year one?