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| anonymous 2007-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL PeTER! |
| sfjhalruwe 2004-10-18 ch 1,  | abuseaw...I guess I'll have to list you so I can reread your shit, after all |
| Twitch Hopeless-Savage 2004-03-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. Bravo |
| beaver 2004-02-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! It's so good! |
| down-right-mystical 2004-02-21 ch 1, | abusehow you've linked these four poems together with the starting line prooves that you've put thought into this and its not something thats come of the top of you're head, and that makes the charaterization in it just amazing too. I think that Snape's poem was probably my favourite, the way you've written his thoughts as though deep down he really does care for the marauders, is the kind of image we all really want to see in him - to know that he's not all bad really, that there is some human sensitivity in him - i like how you've kept that same character flowing throughout all of your Snape fics. |
| Perverted monk Miroku 2003-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThese are wonderful and are most likely the best POV poems about the Potter's death I have ever read. Very good. |
| theKnowItAll 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was very well written and nicely thought out. It makes you realize just how sad James and Lily's dying was! tear!! but anyways yes good work cheers |
| star 2003-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow the ice falling down Snape's face is great.Many other image/ideas are powerfuland insightful--Wormtail 'neath the cross, the idea that after the time of grief comes the time ofcoping... I also like how poor pathetic Peter doesn't know himself at all. |
| Gracelynn 2003-10-07 ch 1, | abuseI really liked these poems. They flowed really well. I love how you tied them all together with the first lines. |
| FallenWraith 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseyou rhyme good...i can't...damn you! in order: Remus,Snape,Sirius,Peter |
| Ada Kensington 2003-09-11 ch 1, | abuseYou're very good at this rhyming game, aren't you? Personally, I'd say that Remus's and Severus's poems were the best. Very well written. Kudos. - Ada K. |
| ANITA 2003-09-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseCHESS! I don't want to tell you my name, but I bet you can guess who this is by "Incredibly Delicious, my Mole is Pertruding outward" HAHAH well anyways...I really LOVE this poem!! I dont know what it is about it, but something just really SENDS UP A "WOW" sign in my mind haha!! I find myself reading this over and over and over especailly the last line of Snape's verse. Well keep writing my dear |
| Harmonic Friction 2003-08-27 ch 1, | abuseWhoa.. I love this. I adore grim poetry, and this is just plain beauty. I especially like Snape's verses. This is going on my Favorite stories.. |
| sarah! 2003-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello as you can probably see my name is Sarah and your poem made me cry which is a big thing as i never cry it was just so sweet and i was wondering if you had the time could you please e-mail me another one? Thank you for your time! |
| Fairy 2003-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are an AMAZING poet; I loved this piece. Write on! |