Reviews for Ranma 12: Feelings Shown

Reviews For: Ranma 12: Feelings Shown

caedi 2003-08-25 ch 2,	abusethis fic is really great! i love it, but could do with a little more detail, other than that, it is fantastic! Please update soon! i luv this fic!
dennisud 2003-07-27 ch 2,	abuseOk, you seem to be rushing it with this one.. What I mean is every encounter you had here, Ukyo, Shampoo, and Ryouga could have been expanded and detailed enough for separate chapters. Especially Ryouga's fight with Ranma. Also Ukyo and Akane's scene could have been lengthened out some more. The overall story is good but as I said byr rushing things along, your losing some of the power of the storyline. dennisud
Siribe-chan 2003-07-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseAs a real fan of Ranma fanfics, I must say this story is WONDERFUL! You totally capture the essence of the characters, and your writing is top notch! Akane and Ranma are so silly at not admitting their feelings! But that's why we love them! I bet Akane and Ranma will really admit their love for each other in your story, because that's what they should do! But wouldn't it be a surprise if they didn't?! I really suggest you submit this fic to http://w.faniac.com an up and coming new fanfiction magazine. I think 'Ranma 12:Feelings Shown' is exactly the kind of story they are looking for!
meeko 2003-07-14 ch 1, anon.	abusehey, i love it! great story so far! i can't wait to see what ranma's got planed poor guy, it hit him pretty hard. he may love akane but he never expected her to love him back, that makes you very confused. can't wait for the next chapter! update soon please!

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