I like it but you messed up with frenkinstien. Do a little research on the origanl story and you will find that it is quit diffrent.

Whoo. I got shivers after reading this. Which is good, by the way.

This is probably one of the best one-shots I've ever read. Congrats! ^.^

Wow... liked it very much... Im not into yaoi, yuri or any other... but this story is special, not only cuz u put romance in small amounts, but 'cuz u gave Kaworu that calm-apocaliptic voice that he so has... its cool, keep it up!
P.S: 'Mokushiroku'... u, nice one!
EVIL RULES!
Nara Starr

Actually Kaoru/Tabris was the 17th Angel sent to prevent third impact. Still, this is a look in a soldier in a war that should not even be taking place.
And it's people like Shinji that proves humans are worth saving, not the opposite.

Very intersting...and very well written!

This is really good. I enjoyed reading. ^_^

Very nice. I congratulate you.

Interesting Kaworu POV, I've never read anything like this. Good job and Keep On Writing :D