NOOOOOOO! Please! Don't do this to me! I hate this ending! Why would Yuki walk away, leaving him sitting there on the floor? This was sooooo good! Why did Yuki do this to him? To me? Aahhh! ...anyways...i loved this story, except for the ending! its so sad!

Wow, that was very good. Hmm..now I want to read a longer Yuki/Haru fic :P

Oooh, I like this!

wow

I really must admit, your story left me speechless

I think it's possibly the most beautiful thing I've ever read, as an aspiring author I must admit I envy your writing ability.

I think it's rather clear you have a very distinct voice, have you ever considered writing a book? If not I suggest you grab your keyboard open up a word document and get started, but if you have then I simply wish you GOOD LUCK, I'd definitely buy it and I know many others who would.

Or on a less formal note:

THAT TOTALLY ROCKED! :D

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Oh wow. My breath is erotic.

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Oh wow.

Oh good, I'm yet another person who can never get enough YukixHaru. Well written, very well written. I have no complaints here... Veryu nice job.

Oh wow, this is amazing

Amazing. Absolutely PERFECTLY written. I love your stuff!

That was really really good. It was realistic and I felt as if I was right there. (he he, what I would do to be able to peep on that scene)Viva YxH

The ending don't say much, it sorta just ended without a solution or anything except that Yuki decided to pull away. it leaves us hanging which is pretty frustrating. Even though it strikes up my imagination and curiosity, but it also pisses me off a bit. Cuz I thought it was going to go somewhere...(implying on somehting), and the ending was a little depressing, make it happier mext time, over all this is a fantastic fic!

That's so much sexier than those too-explicit things... and I have to go take a cold shower... hee hee. My sisters would love this. Sarcasm, because I'm our local Shigure, making a big deal out of being turned on by everything just to hear them yell at me. Ee-vill.

Oh gosh, poor Haru. _ He was actually getting somewhere that time. XD;

Wonderful work. Love the style and use of repetition. Please write more soon!

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Oh, glad I found this scene. Very nice. Loved the descriptions and movements, Yuki's inner battle, and the fact that he let Haru get that far - but not quite far enough. What a tease! ;)

I want to know the same thing! Why? Ah... I'm going to read every single one of your furuba fics... (seing as I don't care much for Gravitation fics, and don't know enough about Weiss Krus to read a fi about it Lmao)

WAH! Poor Haru-kunn! *sob*