love the opening line.
I never take Ashiwara to be so "forward" and Ogata is not the kind who would hesitate, but it works here.

i loved it

That Jane Austen "quote" was priceless ^^.
I love your depiction of this pairing!
Cheers!

*snickers*

I don't think this could have ended in a better way.

*dies from laughter*

That Jane Austen quote. Dear Gods. ^^; I loved it.

--Not that he ever would, of course, because the world and its mother could speculate about him until they were blue in the face, but they were still utterly wrong.
Ogata-sensei in denial is so... *looks around to make sure no one's around, then whispers* Cute... ^_^

And that last paragraph - the awesomeliness, na no da! X3 You've really gotten me hooked on this pairing, Ju-san.

how silly.
ogata is in denial.
but no matter since im sure he'll have fun during dinner and... after it. ;)

aw, he had to make Ashiwara embarrased.
but still it was cute, like all your stories.

^_^ Kari

Props to you for quoting pride and prejudice, no matter how mangled ;p make more ogata ashiwara slash you mad fiend you.

lol! Go Ashiwara! I really like your fics! they're so funny!^^

Neat, neat... Very Ogataish, so to say. He's really a very funny man, as you pointed out clearly with the fic. :P Of course it would also be very interesting to read how Ogata and Ashiwara would get along form here on...

for some reason, Ashiwara feels like Akira from Clamp Campus Detectives and Ogata = Yuki Eiri (heck, they have the same voice actors), great fic!

*laughs insanely* good fic! I was laughing all throughout.

"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune but not a wife, must be gay."

that was so approriate... Just want to repeat again that I love your subtlety and writing style! Keep writing ! ^.^

*just looks at Ju and cracks up* I love the subtlety in this, you know that? The... "maybe" note of this is SO to my taste. And dammit, it's one of the reasons I do NOT see Saeki/Ashiwara together, lovely. You've got him firmly planted with Ogata... *is cracking up* One of these days, I'm gonna have to try writing Ashiwara into a fic. He's to cute not to use.

lmao. ahh...gotta love this. ^^ wonderfully written, and it was hilarious too. and you know, Ogata does seem a bit like Yuki Eiri...mweh. =P

*snickers* Nice work. Short and to the point, and somehow Ogata reminds me of Yuki Eiri here? Not much, but just a little. Prolly because he's grumpy and gives in to the cute. Also nice to see some fiction written about other HnG characters - all you see is Hikaru, Touya, Waya or Isumi, and maybe some Sai if you're lucky. Dang. Nice to let some of the other characters have a turn, even though I'm not crazy about shounen-ai, but you pulled it off well! Poor in denial Ogata-sensei...