oh my gosh! the suspense is killing me! update soon and great job! :)

Please update. This fic is awesome so far. I like to see what happens next and whats going on with the guys were are they?... O_0"

Caio

wow wats gonna happen nxt? i gots ta no!! and wat the heck happened to shal? i hope u update soon.

still interesting is that the end?

interesting. i was gonna ask why didnt emma just blast this guy like ever ago i mean i dont know why they would just take it like that when they couldve been out of there long ago but then u mention a power outage thing but that was kinda too quickly glossed over i think it need more explanation. but still an interesting chapter

i think this is a lil more than a k+ story at least a t...but aside from that, it's interesting to see how theyll cope with everthing. one thing i was wondering in the past scene was why was shalimar so helpless? i mean if theyre just three ordinary men or even if theyre extra ordinary she could easily kick their asses even if it was for emma. i'd expect her to fight as hard as she can and theyd eventually have to do more than just hold her down i dont think that would cut it. like in the jail scene when she was chained up she still fought and didnt go down despite her situation. but otherwise interesting and sad chapter

aw soo sad :(

sweet but a little more insight into how emma was feeling wouldve been good

interesting chapter. keeps us in the dark and makes us want to read on so good chapter

nice start to this story

** on im waiting for the next chapter here

This is a really good story, I hope you are planning on continuing it.

please finish. it to good to leave like that.

the fic is great...please update soon!

can't wait for the next chap
hope harvey gets whats coming to him