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| Ghostferal 2006-05-15 ch 7,  | abusePlease update. This fic is awesome so far. I like to see what happens next and whats going on with the guys were are they?... O_0" Caio |
| anonymous 2005-11-17 ch 7, anon. | abusewow wats gonna happen nxt? i gots ta no!! and wat the heck happened to shal? i hope u update soon. |
| Magnus The Wolf 2005-09-13 ch 7, | abusestill interesting is that the end? |
| Magnus The Wolf 2005-09-13 ch 6, | abuseinteresting. i was gonna ask why didnt emma just blast this guy like ever ago i mean i dont know why they would just take it like that when they couldve been out of there long ago but then u mention a power outage thing but that was kinda too quickly glossed over i think it need more explanation. but still an interesting chapter |
| Magnus The Wolf 2005-09-13 ch 5, | abusei think this is a lil more than a k+ story at least a t...but aside from that, it's interesting to see how theyll cope with everthing. one thing i was wondering in the past scene was why was shalimar so helpless? i mean if theyre just three ordinary men or even if theyre extra ordinary she could easily kick their asses even if it was for emma. i'd expect her to fight as hard as she can and theyd eventually have to do more than just hold her down i dont think that would cut it. like in the jail scene when she was chained up she still fought and didnt go down despite her situation. but otherwise interesting and sad chapter |
| Magnus The Wolf 2005-09-13 ch 4, | abuseaw soo sad :( |
| Magnus The Wolf 2005-09-13 ch 3, | abusesweet but a little more insight into how emma was feeling wouldve been good |
| Magnus The Wolf 2005-09-13 ch 2, | abuseinteresting chapter. keeps us in the dark and makes us want to read on so good chapter |
| Magnus The Wolf 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abusenice start to this story |
| Supernaturally Angelic 2005-06-18 ch 7, | abuse** on im waiting for the next chapter here |
| cflynn214 2005-04-19 ch 7, | abuseThis is a really good story, I hope you are planning on continuing it. |
| darnella 2005-03-14 ch 7, anon. | abuseplease finish. it to good to leave like that. |
| crazy18 2004-12-23 ch 7, anon. | abusethe fic is great...please update soon! |
| Billy Rose 2004-12-19 ch 7, | abusecan't wait for the next chap hope harvey gets whats coming to him |
| youte 2004-08-01 ch 7, | abuseOuah...Well done. Wonderful really! |