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snapeangel
2009-10-28 . chapter 12
loved how you ended this story

i'll have to check out your two stories mentioned at the bottom

are you going to do a sequal to this one? would be nice to see how he interacts with the new staff and students post war / new addittude and all that..hope u do
snapeangel
2009-10-28 . chapter 11
ah sev got his metal..so very deserved!
snapeangel
2009-10-28 . chapter 9
sappy? approtately (sp?) so at the moment..poor sev
gotta love minerva and kingsley..whip the power hunger white in line!

i would like a sequal to this one when u get there..i'll miss this one when i finish it there is no doubt
snapeangel
2009-10-28 . chapter 6
i agree that harry would have matured enough to get past his dislike / hate of snape ... especially if he would be come friends with draco

fudge is a worthless scumb bag...he should be stretched and quartered
snapeangel
2009-10-28 . chapter 5
i hate idiot fudge..couldn't the death eaters have killed him violently in your story? :D

AD slatting him with his immense magic would be awsome too :D

poor sev
snapeangel
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
well I am geting started reading this story (ok haven't started yet but like the summary, disclaimer, and author's note) and I want to give you kudos for the following things:
1. There will be no slash, sex or profanity! ((THANK YOU LOVE! I don't mind a little 'hinted at sex' or if it's sev and lily not too raunchy sex, but some of this stories are a BIT much, and the excessive profanity in some of these (espeicllay having sev a highly educated highly intellegent man cursing like an old sailor..just doesn't work for me) are crazy, you know a few 'shit' 'bloody' or 'hell' -- few-- is understandable, we all say some version of 'mild' curses now and then especially if like we cut our self (or in my case made up curse words and or growls..but i'm odd and trying to be good :D ) ))
2. Of course this is also an AU and I wanted to portray a strictly paternal relationship between Dumbledore and Snape -- the few stories i have read that HINT or worse a slash lpasring between severus and albus (or wrose sev and harry..shudders, old enough to be his FATHER) is just WRONG! granted sev was abused but not sexually so it's not all that common for him to grow unusual attachments to male authority figures..don't know if that came out right, but I think you get what I mean. anyway..glad you doing these noted things in lyour story..OK LETS READ!
FrostedMidnight
2009-06-13 . chapter 12
Aww, what an incredibly sweet ending! I loved this story, it was very well written and your characters were portrayed very well.
~Frosty
krazylicious
2008-10-08 . chapter 12
the best story i ever read! i love it.
Calsey Galager
2008-08-11 . chapter 12
Thanks so much for the brilliant story. I stayed up far to long into the night just to get to the end. I loved every second of it. and couldn't wait to get to the next paragraph just to know what happens next. Thanks Again

Calsey
eideticMeMoRy22
2008-08-03 . chapter 12
i loved this story!! it was awesome and well written!!
SpencerReid
2007-10-12 . chapter 4
UPDATE! awsome job, happy writing.

XD
shawn-small
2007-05-21 . chapter 12
Great story- off to read the prequel. Thanks for writing.
AdamiRose
2007-03-13 . chapter 12
That was an absolutely beautiful story. and you were correct. very happy ending, and yes the tissues were needed. Very well written.
isadax
2006-07-22 . chapter 12
Love this story. I am going to read all your writing now.
HeartbreakDX
2006-06-24 . chapter 1
I think I've read this before. Do you have it posted anywhere else?
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