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| 1Pinky 2007-11-24 ch 8,  | abuseOk, so amateurish I couldn't finish it, I'm surprised I read this far. Work on your plot, do some research to back said plot and work on character dialogue |
| GregsLabrat 2006-12-02 ch 11, | abuseVery nice story, both of you! I luved it! |
| QueenOfTheUniverse 2005-11-11 ch 11, | abuseWow, I can't believe I never finished reading that! Well, great job! What a cliffhanger! -QOTU |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2004-11-24 ch 11, | abuseNice story! I love it! Keep up the good work! |
| Acacia Jules 2004-09-28 ch 3, | abuseYou're trying to tell us, that Greg wouldn't remember a murder he witnessed and testified about when he was in his early twentys, probably the only murder he ever saw. It probably tramatized him too, he would have had to get to know the other guys, possibly known them before hand, yet your expecting us to believe that he would have had NO memory of the other people, or the incident? *rolls eyes* I'm finding your fic's plot highly unlikely and unbelievable. It's not like Greg was a child when this happened, so it was easy for him to have forgotten. Even then, he most likely would have remembered, because tramatic events tend to stick with people. |
| Padfoot4ever 2004-04-11 ch 11, | abuseGREAT JOB! |
| elise 2004-04-11 ch 11, anon. | abusenice story line but poorly aranged |
| scatteredbrains 2004-04-11 ch 11, | abuseaw! that's sweet! heehee! GREAT story, by the way! so, plz update ur other stories and write more stories plz! really, they're all really good! =D =D =D |
| Caudripteryx 2004-04-11 ch 11, anon. | abuseThat was a great fic! I'm sad it's over... |
| Animefangirl2 2004-04-11 ch 11, | abuseGive it up, cuz now I'm back! HELLO! Been a while since I reviewed, BUT LENT'S FINALLY OVER! Anyways, GREAT ENDING KRAZY! I loved this story so much! And I'm kinda sad to see it end, but at least all the CSIs ended up safe in the end! Great story and I can't wait to see more from you guys! Sayonara for now! |
| Sillie 2004-04-10 ch 11, | abuseHeh..that was cute.. |
| Padfoot4ever 2004-04-06 ch 10, | abuseGreat job! Continue soon! |
| scatteredbrains 2004-03-06 ch 10, | abuseaw! that's so sweet! hehe, Greg lookin out for Nick and Nick lookin out for Greg! aw! lol! yes! so Fred has been arrested! nice! hopefully, he'll be in jail for a VERY long time! lol! but anyways, GREAT chapter! i really loved this! yey! more Greg angst! that was good! =D well, plz update REALLY soon! n ur other story too plz! =D =D =D |
| Cudripteryx 2004-03-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseKeep going! |
| Sillie 2004-02-29 ch 10, | abuseHehe... I'm glad they're both okay... ^__^ |