great fan-fic. when you finish it, i suggest a surprise ending

AWESOME story. Can't wait for more. brilliant

Great beginning! I expect great things from this story. Keep going!

I love your stuff, know that? It's great. All of it. I don't think I've ever reviewed any of it, though. Or maybe I have. I don't know. But so far the story's good, so write some more and keep me happy...please?

I like this story, very well written so far. Continue it because it seems to be getting good!

I liket it! continue it please.

Encouragement :)