wonderful. insightful and a 'traject romance' that didn't make me want to projectile vomit.

this... made my heart sing. YOu made them... perfect. Amazing. almost no mistakes, amazing way with words, you captured their personas SO WELL. i... it made my cold, unfeeling heart beat. I love you.

For some strange reason i'm crying T-T very lovely fanfic

Again. Wow. Me likey. Incoherent now, k? k.

You really captured Nny. And the relationship. And my brain. Brain.

Okay. I'm going to go think now.

Yey... dey didn't die!

AAH! It's too early in the morning yet I'm so happy and hyper after reading this!!1!
I bet I'm going to fall asleep and dream this...

Enough about me... Abso-freaking-awesome story!!1!

Arrgh! Damb you Zarla! You're Vargas is too dambed good to forsake because of lack of kissy-ness! If it wern't for you're awesome skills I wouldn't be sitting here at 1 in the morning looking for fics to fill the need and feed the beast. I curse your talent...did I mantion how much i like this fic?

This is increddible amazing fantastic your stuff is amazing truly well written, in character, everything amazing keep writing

It's amazing. I think your one of the few authors that can make me cry. Your writing is just so beautiful.
I feel all patheitc and stuff now.

You must continue writing. I will be checking.

Heartbreakingly beautiful. I'm always amazed by the talents of writers such as yourself. You captured NNy and Edgar perfectly, and ii applaud you for that. The realtionship between NNy and Edgar is slashy, but not incredibly so, and it's more of a broken romance than anything else. Once again, lovely work.

That was so beautiful, it made me cry. Really. Even if it was slashy. I don't see why people have problems with NNy being gay, because it's not one of "those stories" like most Dib/Zim slash where the two are going at eachother like animals in heat. I think Johnny and Edgar's love is deeper than that, based on trust and companionship and not who's on top;p Of course, these are my opinions and could be just as flawed as anyone else's. Woah...I guess there wasn't need for all that excess then. Well, I better be going; today's Tuesdays and you know what THAT means...UFOs!O.o

(actually, today is a Thursday. Heehee. I am so confusing, yes?)

E, I still notice some modification blips in the paragraphing! Sorry, I didn't respond to this fic because I was too busy to check if you actually posted it--I wanted a response from you after critiquing, dammit! Ah well... I can deal with it.

I like how you finally posted it, and it's... a little sad, seeing how people react to it. Like they only skimmed the surface of the context--this took quite a bit to edit and configure, yeah?

I loved helping you out, nonetheless. Actually, I'm rather interested in knowing exactly what parts of beta-ing Xel-chan did in this. Perhaps I should poke her in the side and say "Hi" one of these days...

...In response to the first review, I wanna whack that person for actually reading Zim and Dib stuff... Fantastizing about shit characters that don't contribute to the master JV at ALL... Yarrg.

I wanna update on Vargas! Gah, my AOL SN is Sypra89. Call me, or... "call"? Yeah, okay... yeah.

P.S. What's with all these people being upset with slashiness? And two guys kissed on Evanglion? Sweet! I wanna se...

That was great, actualy it was fantastic, although i dont agree on the whole jhonny and edgar kissing thing (by the way, this is just a geuss, but you didnt mean that they were gay with the kiss, sorta like in evangelion with tibris and shinji, please tell me if thats correct) it was really good, and im looking forward to seeing if the moose still kills everyone ^_^

Shite, that was good. You really got into NNy's head. I like much. Tis very 'real' to the comic.

firebird

Wow, man. Just... wow. Creepy, and beautiful, and true to character. Just awesome. I love it.

Dil