Hey! I'm still going to be continuing to read and review to this, but I was wondering at the jump between Chapters 2 and 3, it didn't seem to make much sense to me, and if it was intentional, a quick note in the Authors Note section would be really beneficial. I personally think this story is pretty good. very funny in bits (I like the taking out of Jack - very cute).

Anyways - continue on!

Nela

nine hundren hours is 9 am, not 7. seven hunderd hours is 7 am.

'She sat acrosst from him on the other couch'

it would be better to have 'she sat across from him'.

theres not such word as acrosst or acrossed or acrost...

got his or her hands on Bastet’s staff? It could CATastrophic.

unintended pun?

Not sure why, but I didn't get a update message like fanfiction was suppose to tell me about for the new chapter here. Whatever the case, I think this chapter was great and I am really glad to see that you didn't stop writing even though you are probably so busy your head is spinning. At least that's the way I think you were somewhat saying the last time we spoke several months back. I hope you get more time to continue it soon!

Ur stori has been msted just lettin u kno.

http : // community .livejournal. com/ cosmicpasteries /9126. html#cutid1

u gotta take da spaces out

0900 is 9 o'clock

Oh, that is totally hillarious. Seriousley, I laughed so hard, I cried!

Jez, the girl just keeps getting younger and younger. At the beginning she was 17 then she was 16 and now she's 15. Make up your mind!

T^T aw man... I hate waiting... I LOVE IT! I've been entertained very well with your story for the last four days! *falls to knees* I can't wait for an update! T^T

It is good to see you continuing this story DragonQueen, it's one of my favorites. Please continue to write and update, and do not worry about anyone saying anything about the writing thing. After all it is a wise person who knows that there is much he does not know, or woman rather.

Please, continue, must continue. It's awesome though.

Hey, the randomness is good, it makes her seem a little more human. Beuno! (or however you spell that, I don't speak Spanish :) )

Uh, good story! It took me forever to read it, but I really like the story line. I hope her and daniel get together, maybe she can get older somehow. if they got togeter now itd be kinda creepy... even though my wolf series has jack with a way younger chick... update now!

I just started reading this story for the first time and I am confused. Chapter 3 is called Continuation of Crystal Skull and it seems like a chapter or two is missing. Am I missing something?