Peter squeaked, and I felt my face flame. Remus looked completely unruffled. “Now, that’s a rather unfair exaggeration.”

“Oh?” said James, looking from me to Remus and back again.

“It was just a bit of friendly groping,” Remus said mildly. “If you want to see anything really interesting you’re going to have to skip Quidditch practice.”

BEST. PART. EVER. O_O xD SERIOUSLY! xDD

This was wonderful! Just the right length, amount of environment descriptions, talking and - brooding:) And just that he finished the whole thing with thinking of Peter was just Brilliant!

I like Sirius like this. I mean, I can just get a real look at his character. I don't know how this would have been if there was any real action where he would have been forced to act recklessy. But as this fic treat the subject of growing into an adlut, I can just say that this is great work, even if it in style resembles an one shot.

I totally loved Remus' response to James, late in the last chapter! And the nervousness about the kiss.. James' room would be just like mine, had I been a witch - especially with the photographs and sweets lying around.
All in all, it was a nice story, managing to work in humour, slight R/S-fluff and the more solemn (deliberately avoiding the word serious? Me? I'd never) subject of Sirius' family and his lack of relationship with them. Shortly, the ingredients I value in a story. Keep on writing, I'll keep on reading :)

This was really good! Sirius's family was very well portrayed, and I thought that Regulus's comment after his borhter was Crucio'd (is he alive?) was very good, considering that he wasn't all that bad.

This was excellent! I love how you wrote Sirius' father. This awkwardness and love in the kiss in the forest was brilliant!

absolute fantastic! i loved this story...

this is well written and I enjoyed it immensely! Remus' and Sirius' characters seemed to really come alive with this story!

Well Done!

First, I would like to say I never made such a connection with Voldemort and Hitler, the whole wanting to 'cleanse' society, I knew. But the idea that both were not even what they considered to be perfect, hadn't. And I thank you for pointing that out!

I thoroughly enjoyed this, I think I'm having a growing liking for slash, only of course if they involve Remus Lupin. Well thought out, I thought they got together at the perfect moment. Added bonus for including a flying motorcycle!

great job!

/Aw/.

It was depressingly short, but almost the exactly right length anyways. Didn't Sirius run away in the summer of fifth year? Ah well. And as for the friendship between the marauders... it's depressingly rare to see it portrayed as well as you managed to. As I myself have 3 best friends- an arangment that fits us rather well into the roles of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs- I'd like to think that I know more or less how they'd act (admitedly, not being a teenage boy, I can't say completely for certain, but still). And outside of some of the truly greatest stories- The Shoebox Project, Priori Incantatem, and a few others- yours does the best job of showing this that I've ever seen.

Now, I'm really sorry to leave with just this review, but I have a /splitting/ headache and desperately need Tylenol now, so goodbye.

Bloody brilliant.

that was amazing... SO WELL DONE! u always manage to keep them in character!
LUV IT

This was just...just amazing. I loved the impending threat of Voldemort, and Sirius's awful family. It was all portrayed so realistically, with nothing glazed over, and the perfect romance on the side. It was also so believable that Sirius withdrew himself from the world after he arrived at the Potters', and it took Remus to bring him back. In all, this story was simply fantastic.

Jesus. That ending almost brings me to tears, especially since you KNOW what's going to happen to them later.

I love the tone (so solemn to be Sirius) and I love the story in general. Remus is a laugh and a half, and James and Peter... sigh.

Alright, slightly incoherent, but there you go. See what you reduce me to, you evil thing?

a really good story, I liked it ! ^^

This is seriosly wonderful and if it weren't 1am I'd probably ramble on a bit more but for now you'll just have to make do with the knowledge that I really really like this.:)