A great story. Very good.

very cute! spelling doesnt bother me. overall u did a great job!

aw! *melting heart*

Hey it's me. I love your poem. It's so touching. Well I updated my Story so come and read my 2nd chapter.

A very sweet little poem, it deals with the emotion between Kurt and Ororo very well, the spelling mistakes need to be fixed obviously as they are a bit jarring (then again I'm not really one to talk on that matter- my spelling and grammar suck!) If your spell check is broken perhaps get a beta reader for future fics/poetry? I'd be happy to volunteer my services! ( rel_prince@hotmail.com )
Anyway I have rambled long enough so in conclusion- very good poem, you should write more!

Wow, I loved it! Best K/O poem I've read so far!