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The Rabid Badger
2008-03-15
ch 4,
abuseThis story lacks some... facts. Your characterization of at least Tyr is pretty bad. Why would he tell strangers about his life story? Voyager has 4,0 hands? I think the full crew complement is supposed to be around 150, and with the problems Voyager has been in, it's considerably less than that. Even the big federation battleships rarely carry more than 750 crewmembers.
sg07
2006-07-21
ch 11,
abuseGood story. Thank you.
bfireraven
2005-12-06
ch 11, anon.
abuseGreat story. you should make a sequel. Also I thought I should point out that Tuvok is Voyagers security officer not the science officer
Locathah
2005-09-23
ch 3,
abuse"I am quite capable of expressing emotions although not in quite the range or intensity that sentient beings do."

Rommie IS sentient... and considers herself so. Perhaps the word 'organic' would make more sense?
Cheile
2005-01-18
ch 11,
abusevery interesting. i already let you know of the little fix i saw re: B'Elanna's rank.

to Miss High and Mighty criticizing the Q characterization--apparently you missed the idea of Q being on trial. he's not gonna go doing more damage so he can get into more trouble. Q may be a pain in everyone's ** practically but he's not stupid.
rankokun alpha
2004-12-19
ch 11,
abusei hope your going to tell what the exchange was over? say slip stream shield generators that sort of thing?
Tyson
2004-04-30
ch 4,
abuseIt is a great story. there are only 150 crewmembers on board Voyager and not 4,0.
Andromeda-Avatar
2003-12-09
ch 1,
abusereally great story. pls write a sequal.
Luis
2003-12-03
ch 11, anon.
abuseInteresting crossover story you've got here. I hope you do a sequel to this story and I hope it includes technology exchanges between the U.S.S Voyager and the Andromeda Ascendant. Please continue; write more very soon. :)
MaryRose
2003-10-15
ch 11,
abuseThat was pretty cool.
WBH21C
2003-10-14
ch 11, anon.
abuseVery well done!
Era Novem
2003-09-14
ch 11, anon.
abuse^_^ SEQUAL! SEQUAL! SEQUAL! It was great!
Sharem
2003-09-13
ch 11,
abuseI really enjoyed this story. I would like to see a sequel to it...^_^
Alara Rogers
2003-09-08
ch 9,
abuseHmm. Has it occurred to any of the Voyager *or* Andromeda crew that if Q has only lost his powers for 24 hours, throwing him in the brig and humiliating him is a REALLY BAD IDEA? I mean, the Enterprise crew saved his life and they weren't responsible for the loss of his powers in the first place, so he didn't try to get revenge on them for throwing him in the brig. But these people have blocked his powers, threatened his life, and thrown him in the brig. Are they stupid? If they're so convinced Q is basically harmless and wouldn't, say, turn them all into toads or throw them up against the Borg, why are they treating him so dismissively? And if they think he's dangerous and untrustworthy, why are they risking him trying to get revenge after his powers come back? Realistically they have two choices: treat Q as if he still has the power to turn them into eels, because tomorrow he will, or kill him while he's vulnerable. Treating him as if he's helpless, and humiliating him, when tomorrow he'll be omnipotent again is a dumb thing to do to an entity who's been known to make people fight the Borg because he got mad that they wouldn't let him join the crew.

I still don't understand why it keeps being brought up that Q was reprimanded by the Continuum when you established this happens *after* the Q Civil War. The people who reprimanded Q are *not in charge* of the Continuum anymore. Given that Q was the leader of the movement for freedom, and Janeway helped his side win, *Q* is now one of the leaders of the Continuum... so why is is relevant that he was reprimanded by the old leadership once? This could only make sense if it happens before the war or if this is a sequel to something else you've written in which Q is reprimanded.

I think this story would have made more sense if it had been a TNG story or if you'd used Q's son (although then you'd have lost the joke about Uncle Sid). Q just is not the character you think he is in the time period you're writing. Janeway is consistently treating him like Picard would, not like Janeway would. In fact the whole VOY crew is behaving toward Q like the TNG crew did, not like the VOY crew did.

The story certainly has the potential to be a good and interesting story, but you can't use a character and ignore all of his character development. I mean, you might as well have Chakotay being the Angry Maquis or B'Elanna being the Wild Ill-Tempered Klingon who punches people in the nose, like in the first three episodes.
Katharina-B
2003-09-07
ch 9,
abuseThanks for the new chapter. I like it, but I'm a little surprised that Trance can take Q's power away, even if only for 24 hours. Does that means she's more powerful then the Q?
And who's the "familiar face"?
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