so sweet

Bah, Ignore the flames. Use 'em. Don't let that get to you. Tey are just people who can't write anything good, so they get jealous and insult other writers for it, they will flame if anything goes ooc, AU,etc. It has to be perfect for them.
Anyways, I love this story. :) Keep up da good work!

actually the pharoah made EIGHT millenium items not 7. In the new yugioh movei coming to theatres in the U.S. august 13 it unveils the 8th item.

Oh god this is so wonderful! It is really good! It's awesome!

I am still with you on this! I know you can finish this story! And if the flamer discourages you, I have a few words for that certain flamer: Here's the deal whoever you are flamer, if you are such a 'hot shot' why don't YOU make a story of youre own mr.I-can't-make-my-own-story-so-I-critize. If you are such a great person flamer, then quit spending youre time getting jealous because someone wrote a good story. Ok anyway, like I said, Duet Maxwell, I am still with you on this, you write better and more passionatly then anyone I've seen on this website. Anyway who opposes is just a sad person that lives in a box. :) I will help you if you need help, and the reason I couldn't answer any e-mails was because it was a friend of mines e-mail adress. But, my AIM is thunder19004, if you'd like to talk to me for suggestions or just talk to me. :)
P.S. All flamers on this story, I will FLAME you, LITERALLY!

Omg! It rocks! I am so happy you updated! Screw what that flamer said, this story is awsome! :) I added you to my fav author's list. :) If you ever get this printed and into store which I hope you do, let me know because I'll be you're first costumer. :) Been reading this awsome story since the day you wrote it, never lost faith in ya. :) Lol, sorry for the outburst, guess I'm just Malik obsessed *wink wink* *smirk* :)

Well, before you read this review, warning, it's a big 'ol flame. yup... lotta marshmellows and smores to be made out of this one.

Okay... let me think for a moment to see if i can find something in your story you didnt copy from somewhere else... (9 weeks later) nope. nothing. and you couldnt even get the sennen items straight. there are SEVEN, ONLY SEVEN, PHARAOH NOT MAKE MORE THAN SEVEN, SCALE, RING, ROD, PUZZLE, EYE, NECKLACE, KEY! THAT'S IT!
also it's the same thing with the god cards... there are three. period. also yami never had older sister, many of those "rose duelists" (copied from ps2 game duelist of roses im sure) directly contradict things that happened in the show which you were obviously trying to be faithful to. oh yeah and if you sick neko seto or inu joey on me... i have catnip and god card for seto and food and chew toy for inu joey... so THERE! (also your fics have too much song, too little fic and arent that well written in the first place)



but other than that, it was just fine XD

It rocks! I love this story! Please update soon! I am always looking for honest stories about Malik! :)

I thought it was the perfect love story. I loved it and it made the evilest person seem so good I loveditI think it should have a second part then get it published for the world to read. You could make alot of money with that story

this is so cool
and funny
Please update

that was great

I realy liked it
OOdawg: Now if only I could have Yami Bakura
Shut up OOdawg
Thats my Yami, she is a pain in the butt.
OOdawg:Am not!
I really liked it
OOdawg: So did I cant wait to read more.
Me to... Well cant wait to read the rest your a good writer and keep up the good work.
OOpuppydawg

O_o; bakura is very out of character. when i write using him i dont think he's one of those characters who can get away with being OC. i liked this chapter. it was really good. i liked it a lot. hm...i'm trying to think of some tips but i can't think of any. ^_^ great chapter! u write really well!

angelkohaku

O_o; uh...

Seto: hey. at least they're straight. angelkohaku just finished reading a yaoi fic thats about to have a lemon with me and that mutt over there. i'm sorry, but i prefer my own race.

Jou: itz not like i enjoyed the romance between me and you in da first place.

Bakura: i'm not done with you, foolish mortal. you will experience my power soon enough.

oye. aneways. back to the review. this chapter was ok. but if you want to write a serious fic it can't be coming in and out of humor. ^_^ itz really good tho. that was my only advice. great fic! i love it!

angelkohaku ^_^

Oh god this was GREAT once again. You know this was really great except for the fact that she killed a seagull. NOw that's just sad on the other hand... it's great! Well I must continue on and actualy try to get people to read my stories... have a nice day!