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| Cap'n Pirate Monkey 2003-09-08 ch 1, | abuse...and in few words you've managed to paint us a portrait of early shinra. how the hell do you manage to put so much life and soul into pixellated characters? a work of magicianship, and nothing less. great stuff. |
| Digger McFoogle 2003-07-20 ch 1, | abuse*gawps* I still dont know how you do it... suvh beautiful language perfectly posed to create a heart wrenching story in just one chapter... x Deathy |
| ScarletSeraph 2003-07-20 ch 1, | abuseO. *perk, bounce* This looks verra promising. Can't wait for more. ^_^ |
| Scarr 2003-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseSqauresoft threw in a supercilious name and forced us to exterminate those characters, but you gave them lives before they died. Excellent introduction. More? :) |
| Tiger 2003-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo... darkly... pretty. I love how the Turks formed, in fact I love the entirety. M. |
| Metallicafangirl 2003-07-17 ch 1, | abuseBloody awesome. |
| paperie 2003-07-16 ch 1, | abuse*prances around in tight elf-leggings* I know who the boy and girl are, I know who the people are. *whispers meekly* But I don't know the rest, so you gots to tell me. *prods Pip* |
| Noacat 2003-07-16 ch 1, | abuseWOW! This was less like prose and more like really long poetry. Wonderful job of explaining without explaining. This is an awesome beginning! |