A good ending. I liked it very much and the ending was awesome. Great story and I look forward to reading your future fics.

That's it... honestly I thought there was far more story to be told than that. I thought this was going to go a lot longer, and frankly I'm kind of disappointed that there isn't.

Well, good story I wish you luck with your future projects.

Later,
Phoenix

Way to go! Nice work on bringing this chapter out! You should be proud of yourself.

It seems that the adventure has just begun for the couple. Many more await them, but let us see on how things turn out in the future.

Keep it up!

Come on now. Update! Its been not 1, not 2, 3 months since you updated! Some of us have been waitin patiently but enough is enough. Update!!

it was great! i cant wait for the next chap.

Good chapter, I enjoyed it,

Cya,
Phoenix

This was all good! Thank you so much for updating! The fight was really tight!

It seems May can hold her own quite well, and Roxanne was cool! The battle scenes were very well-written here.

Update soon! Keep it up!

Update already! Its been over 2 months and we're still patiently waiting. Update!

It's getting close to 2 months since last update so get with it. I've been waiting patiently and I want to read another chapter. Pleas Update!

PLEASE OH PLEASE HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

man u sure made ash a hot cutie.^^ i hope things get cleared up soon and i kind of wished some guys paid attention to may though. just a thought.;] u know hehe well i love the pokemon and i hope may can talk to pokemon and soon too. laters! ^_^

Great chapter. Can't wait for the cat fight coming up next. Please Update soon! I can't stand waiting for a story as great as this to be updated. Update Soon!

0_0 Man, thanks for updating! I love it! The Pokemon fight, the scene between Ash and May, and now the catight of the century between three very powerful women! What more can a guy ask for?!

Excellent work! Keep it up!

Shadow Phoenix: Sweet, cat fight ::Grabs Popcorn::

This should be amusing,

Shadow Phoenix: That poor girl having to suffer through all these woman making advances on her husband,

Poor Ash... wait no he's a lucky SOB how many does he have chasing after him,

Shadow Phoenix: Four at last count,

I've never had the experience of having four woman chase after me ::Grumbles::

Shadow Phoenix: Neither have I,

Great chapter,

Shadow Phoenix: Indeed,

Cya,
Shadow Phoenix and Phoenix

Wow! This was cool! Thanks for updating! I see you made some additions to the idea I gave you. Excellent!

It seems that the battle will start soon, and it will rage on visciously! May and the others need to fight smarter rather then harder. Even though they have a lot of Pokemon and students, they are still outnumbered and inexperienced in a serious fight.

Awesome job! Keep it up!