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| theunknownchild 2008-06-09 ch 39,  | abuseI LOVED this story. But when I saw it did not say complete on it, I wondered if I had missed something. I dont know if it would matter that much to anyone, but it might bring more readers here. I know I usually won't read a non compleated story because I know when i get to the end, I will want more and there will be nothing there cause the author hasn't written it yet. anyways, great job once again! |
| Marie 2008-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuselol! I can't believe you had Miroku say Sheila. That is too funny. |
| Kaiyou-Kitsune 2008-04-13 ch 39, | abuseOmg omg omg.I LOVE YOU!*glomp*This story is so amazing.Its so romancy and sweet and dramatic and moving!*sobbing*You are my most favoritist of favorite authors.Ever.Like,ever ever.I am going to stalk you and your writing. o_o Happiness! |
| Kaiyou-Kitsune 2008-04-13 ch 35, | abuseOmg.That was so sad.I hate you and love you right now, you know that?*sobbing* I'm seriously crying right now.That was so...depressing.I really just want to strangle and hug Sesshoumaru simultaneously at the moment.And whack him upside the head for good measure.So sad... |
| Sesshomaru is Fluffy Evil 2008-04-11 ch 39, | abusei like it, but u said it was over so...how come the story says it is not 'completed' |
| the only intelligent reveiw... 2008-02-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseYo I noticed quite a few mistakes just in this first chapter, the first of them being you switching between past and present tense: eg: "Kaede hangs up the phone and turns on her computer" - present -next paragraph- "She clicked on a file and read when it popped up on screen" - past decide woman. also. -“Yes, this is Kaede. How can I help you?” a moment pause “Yes, I know who he is.” - what is "a moment pause"? this does not make sense. fix it now. thanks k bye. |
| Mew Heart :] 2008-02-01 ch 16, anon. | abuseOkay, so this is chappy 16 I am reading now, and I have to say, This is by far the best story I ave ever read on here. No lie! You are one of my favorite authors atm I would critick...(Spelling error @__@) But there is nothing wrong with this story! I am so glad I started to read it! email me and we can talk more if you want! ^_^ I will be reveiwing again soon!! ♥ Mew! |
| iloveebfanfics 2008-01-12 ch 19, | abuseum the last section of the chp confuses me, wasnt part of it in another chp, where he was abducted? and then it jumps to other stuff, im confused...hehe |
| ShiroOokamiInu 2007-11-03 ch 39, anon. | abuseLoved this story so much! Question: why didnt sesshomaru ever use the sword kagome gave him when they we fighting naraku? I thought he was going to use that when he said he needed something like the shikon jewel. |
| ShiroOokamiInu 2007-10-28 ch 24, anon. | abuseLOVE IT! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! |
| Pinksakura200 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseone word: WOW |
| The Intelligent Alchemist 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG OMG OMG OMG OMGOMG OMG OMG OMGOM GOMG! I love your story! |
| FlyAwaytotheMoonAbove 2007-09-09 ch 39, | abuse...Your. ["What the hell are you doing half-breed?!" }giggles{ "I love being a half-breed...sometimes."] that was cute at the end. and are you going to do a sequel? please do...I love your stories. }chibi style{ your on my favorite authors list! |
| aries vs. leo 2007-08-15 ch 2, | abuseur stories r grt ...lots of originality )...sry broken keyboard hard to type... |
| Dragonluvr1993 2007-08-09 ch 39, | abuseThis was such a LOVELY story! I guess I am a sucker for romance and happy endings...GAH! WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?!? Shadowpaw: Aww...is poor old DL getting soft on me? Poor little (bonk) YEOWCH! Heh, she sounds funny when I thwak her since she's a cat! Anyways, another happy ending to another one of you stories. I have now gotten the inspiration to write a Kagome and Sesshoumaru pairing story. (Sweatdrops) I am nervous, though. I've tried to do an Inuyasha story before, and it didn't...end so well. Shadowpaw: Are you kidding? You friggin' got frustrated and gave up, deleting it from the world entirely! I DON'T NEED YOUR ASSISTANCE IN REMEMBERING THAT, SHADOWPAW! ...Sorry. She gets on my nerves sometimes. Yeah, so...you know what? I'll just send the question in a PM, in case someone...I don't know! ...Reads it? Shadowpaw: Paranoid... (bonk) Oww - HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY DON'T HIT ME?!? Each time I forget. Shadowpaw: GR! Heh, you can't hurt me cuz I'm your creator! Muahahaha! Shadowpaw: Keh, whatever... OMG! Inuyasha has possessed Shadowpaw! Shadowpaw: What?? Nothing. (smiles innocently) |