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theunknownchild
2008-06-09
ch 39,
abuseI LOVED this story.

But when I saw it did not say complete on it, I wondered if I had missed something.

I dont know if it would matter that much to anyone, but it might bring more readers here. I know I usually won't read a non compleated story because I know when i get to the end, I will want more and there will be nothing there cause the author hasn't written it yet.


anyways, great job once again!
Marie
2008-05-31
ch 1, anon.
abuselol! I can't believe you had Miroku say Sheila.

That is too funny.
Kaiyou-Kitsune
2008-04-13
ch 39,
abuseOmg omg omg.I LOVE YOU!*glomp*This story is so amazing.Its so romancy and sweet and dramatic and moving!*sobbing*You are my most favoritist of favorite authors.Ever.Like,ever ever.I am going to stalk you and your writing. o_o Happiness!
Kaiyou-Kitsune
2008-04-13
ch 35,
abuseOmg.That was so sad.I hate you and love you right now, you know that?*sobbing* I'm seriously crying right now.That was so...depressing.I really just want to strangle and hug Sesshoumaru simultaneously at the moment.And whack him upside the head for good measure.So sad...
Sesshomaru is Fluffy Evil
2008-04-11
ch 39,
abusei like it, but u said it was over so...how come the story says it is not 'completed'
the only intelligent reveiw...
2008-02-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseYo

I noticed quite a few mistakes just in this first chapter, the first of them being you switching between past and present tense:

eg: "Kaede hangs up the phone and turns on her computer" - present
-next paragraph-
"She clicked on a file and read when it popped up on screen" - past

decide woman.

also.


-“Yes, this is Kaede. How can I help you?” a moment pause “Yes, I know who he is.” -



what is "a moment pause"? this does not make sense. fix it now.
thanks k bye.
Mew Heart :]
2008-02-01
ch 16, anon.
abuseOkay, so this is chappy 16 I am reading now, and I have to say,
This is by far the best story I ave ever read on here.

No lie!

You are one of my favorite authors atm
I would critick...(Spelling error @__@)
But there is nothing wrong with this story!
I am so glad I started to read it!
email me and we can talk more if you want!

^_^
I will be reveiwing again soon!!

♥ Mew!
iloveebfanfics
2008-01-12
ch 19,
abuseum the last section of the chp confuses me, wasnt part of it in another chp, where he was abducted? and then it jumps to other stuff, im confused...hehe
ShiroOokamiInu
2007-11-03
ch 39, anon.
abuseLoved this story so much! Question: why didnt sesshomaru ever use the sword kagome gave him when they we fighting naraku? I thought he was going to use that when he said he needed something like the shikon jewel.
ShiroOokamiInu
2007-10-28
ch 24, anon.
abuseLOVE IT! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
Pinksakura200
2007-10-27
ch 1,
abuseone word: WOW
The Intelligent Alchemist
2007-09-11
ch 1,
abuseOMG OMG OMG OMG OMGOMG OMG OMG OMGOM GOMG! I love your story!
FlyAwaytotheMoonAbove
2007-09-09
ch 39,
abuse...Your. ["What the hell are you doing half-breed?!" }giggles{ "I love being a half-breed...sometimes."] that was cute at the end. and are you going to do a sequel? please do...I love your stories. }chibi style{ your on my favorite authors list!
aries vs. leo
2007-08-15
ch 2,
abuseur stories r grt ...lots of originality )...sry broken keyboard hard to type...
Dragonluvr1993
2007-08-09
ch 39,
abuseThis was such a LOVELY story! I guess I am a sucker for romance and happy endings...GAH! WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?!?

Shadowpaw: Aww...is poor old DL getting soft on me? Poor little (bonk) YEOWCH!

Heh, she sounds funny when I thwak her since she's a cat! Anyways, another happy ending to another one of you stories. I have now gotten the inspiration to write a Kagome and Sesshoumaru pairing story. (Sweatdrops) I am nervous, though. I've tried to do an Inuyasha story before, and it didn't...end so well.

Shadowpaw: Are you kidding? You friggin' got frustrated and gave up, deleting it from the world entirely!

I DON'T NEED YOUR ASSISTANCE IN REMEMBERING THAT, SHADOWPAW! ...Sorry. She gets on my nerves sometimes. Yeah, so...you know what? I'll just send the question in a PM, in case someone...I don't know! ...Reads it?

Shadowpaw: Paranoid... (bonk) Oww - HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO SAY DON'T HIT ME?!?

Each time I forget.

Shadowpaw: GR!

Heh, you can't hurt me cuz I'm your creator! Muahahaha!

Shadowpaw: Keh, whatever...

OMG! Inuyasha has possessed Shadowpaw!

Shadowpaw: What??

Nothing. (smiles innocently)
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