Yay! You are such a great writer...I have no idea what the show is about, never seen it, although I think by looking at this it's modern fantasy... well, great fic! You write so well! And review really well too...I found your page by reading wordwolf's fic that you reviewed.

nicely done

...**...This was very well written! I hope you write more about Cole...I miss him...

that was great. bittersweet. but great! Though in spite of Phoebe's horrble actions, and treatings with Cole. I've always thought they belong together. And that it was she needed. to find strengh to bet on their love. To take a chance, a risk to loose it all. Because it was worth it. So what if they were in the end parted. Then at least she had tried. If I were her, I couldn't have lived with myself if I didn't try. If I didn't take the one chance to become happy. But Phoebe was coweredless and insicure. She is too caugh up with herself to understand how much her doubts and accusations acctually hurt Cole. They drove him to the edge of insanity... and verge of commiting suicide - well, trying to commit suicide anyway. They complete eachother and without ano another, they're just half a person. They'll never find the same breathtaking happiness with anyone else. And this Jason Dean of hers is really a poor excuse for a guy. He's just too booring and self centered. But then again. She deserves to live a booring life after what she did to Cole. She deserves every punch she will ever receive in her life. What goes around comes around. Let's just hope karma will do it's job. I thought the charmed ones job was to protect the innocent. Not punish the guilty. When they killed Cole, and the times they tried. They simply did it for themselves, for peace of mind. They crossed the line, the one line that seperates good from evil.

Now that's an ending!! I love it! It's great!!

i can't believe i enjoyed that as much as i did.I'm usually not into 1 chapter stories but that blew we away. I wish it was longer.

Excellent - Phoebe didn't have the strength or the courage to love Cole the way he deserved to be loved. It is only in the world of fan fiction that we get to have the epic love story the writers of Charmed deprived us of.