Reviews for A Visit From the Past

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101spacemonkey 2007-09-02 ch 13,	abuseaw, sw33t! this was great!
cambodia 2007-05-08 ch 1,	abuseI just finished reading for the first time your story . It was very good actually , because it has such an original plot . That proves you have a great imagination and you're a good writer . I enjoyed it more because I'm a big Greg fan and I see you are too . I mean , The forgotten truth is one of my favs . You really should be more carefull when you write at the spelling mistakes , there aren't too many , which is always a good thing . This is just help ,constructive criticism , I don't want to make u think I don't like it . Usually , when you talk about things that happened "an hour ago" , you use past tense , not present . and when you say he/she/it followed by a verb to present , you put an 's' after this verb . You messed a little in the story chapter the tenses , you never put present and pat in the same sentence . But great story after all !
GregsLabrat 2006-12-02 ch 13,	abuseThis was really good. I luved it!
JerseyJunk 2006-07-03 ch 13,	abuse-large applause- great story, very good. i feel so bad for greg =[ who could bear to watch such and adorable face suffer? -short little obsessive moment- ahem, back on topic =] amazing story, glad everyone made it. x3
JerseyJunk 2006-07-03 ch 5,	abuseomg okay, i wasn't going to review until the end but i decided to get all this out now haha. poor nick, catherine, sara, greggy, and everyone on night shift. how dare those ninjas try and make grissom choose who to save. although, i do think his original choice would be sara but he'd actually end up saving them all. ^_^ i'm off to read more. x3
karmine 2006-02-14 ch 13,	abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! It is one of the GREATEST stories i have evr read! (and i mean it) Favs list all the way! :):):):):):):):)
QueenOfTheUniverse 2005-11-11 ch 13,	abusewow. so this what I missed? What can I say? Besides, great ending! Loved the roller coaster and the last scene with greg! Yay for greg! It's an odd thing, the way we tend to hurt our fav characters the most. Poor greg! But he's ok, so that's good! Great story! -QOTU
Miss Anonymous hp 2005-05-18 ch 13,	abuseThat was really well written! I loved every minute of it!
CheleLiz 2005-01-25 ch 13,	abuseThat was a really well written story -- please write more stories. One thing though, watch your grammar so the story will flow better - but apart from that, well done!
Mrs Hatake Itachi 2004-11-24 ch 13,	abuseNice story! I love it! Keep up the good work!
Mernsley3 2004-11-07 ch 5,	abusehmm... i didn't realize apples could break into millions of pieces...
grace 2004-07-06 ch 3, anon.	abuseextinguisher babe not igniter
kaylee frye 2004-06-08 ch 4,	abuseI am enjoying this story a lot, however having just finished the 3rd chapter entitles Recuse [rescue ?] I am starting to get really irritated by your spelling mistakes / and use of the wrong tense. It takes your readers out of the story when basic english grammer and spelling rules aren't followed. Please, for the sake of your story, clean it up.
Animefangirl2 2004-04-18 ch 13,	abuseYAY! GREG MADE IT! ^_^ Double yay! Grissom recommended him to be a CSI! ^-^ Good ending, I liked it. Can't wait to see more stories from you! Sayonara for now!
scatteredbrains 2004-04-18 ch 13,	abuseyey! happy ending! lol! i loved the ending! i loved the story! =D so, amazing story! loved Greg, actually, still do! lol! so, plz update ur other stories and maybe write another one? heehee...anyways, keep up the fantastic job! =D =D =D

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