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broadwaybaby529
2008-02-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm writing a story w/ Lee Jordan in it and I remembered this one and wanted to read it specifically. I forgot how funny it was... so cute.. good job...
theKRITIC
2008-01-03
ch 1,
abuseYou should write more of Lee--he's such an awesome character and you write him really well.
anon
2007-09-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou do realize we all have to hear about the bribery sex now right?
LostAngel2
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I could not stop laughing...I swear that has happened to me before...LOL...
<3
2007-05-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseNow THAT IS cute!
Hekko
2006-08-25
ch 1,
abuseLee thinks a bit too much of himself, doesn't he? Anyway, it kept me laughing and I even can't put my finger on the sentence that started such thing, so I claim it good. ;)
Her.xx
2006-08-18
ch 1,
abuseLol I LOVE this story it's really really hilarious, and I agree with everyone who reviewed-- I love how you wrote Lee's POV! You did an awesome job at writing this! :) :D

~Randi
Amanita Jackson
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abusedamn well brilliant. i fricking LOVE your Lee.

"Finnigan! Don't tell me you still have morals after all these years!"

heh. morals. pff.
LovesCoffee04
2006-07-20
ch 1,
abuseHilarious! I'm laughing too hard to actually review (sorry) for now, so I'm just going to leave you with what I thought were the funniest parts and hope that this actually qualifies as a review and not just a rehash of your story with me trying to make up for my regretfully and unacceptably terrible lack of reviewing skills by copying someone else's work, that 'someone else' being namely the person whom I am writing to...or words sounding the same as those which I just said but mean something totally different:

"Finnigan! Don't tell me you still have morals after all these years!"

"It was just too sickening and I was sure that, if the cuteness of their not-relationship didn't stop soon, I'd implode and turn into a big puddle of guck that was once a sexy sixth year.
Then the world would mourn horribly and under that sort of depression, economies would crumble and entire societies would crumble into dust. The world as we knew it would fall, decay into an empty husk until all that remained were broken memories and strange artifacts that the archeologists of the future would ponder over. I couldn't let that happen, of course."

"Now run along and be the sickeningly adorable couple that you'll inevitably be."

*snickers uncontrollably* Well, I'll be seeying ya...
haru's
2006-04-25
ch 1,
abuseDude..that was so funny. I couldn't stop laughing. Keep writing that slashy goodness
Alison
2006-04-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseHehe. I loved that. You have the greatest sense of humor!
Plus, I love the ending. ^^
Amberhawk
2006-03-20
ch 1,
abuse...You.Are.BRILLIANT!
ShayaCatalyst
2005-12-23
ch 1,
abuseI THOUGHT i loved your fics BEFORE, but then I read this and am turning into an obbsesive pile of guck! I am putting you on my favorite authors list RIGHT NOW!
happy holidays xoxo-Shaya
LunaML
2005-11-03
ch 1,
abuseWow! I never thought of it like that.
~Luna
Skyla Moon
2005-08-16
ch 1,
abuseMan, that last line made me laugh so hard. And I loved the whole seduction/bribing part. *Grin.*
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