This was a really fun, quick read.

You stuck with Marco and Larynia's characterization consistently. (Which is a good thing!)

I would have liked to see all twelve Animorphs fighting together at some point, but considering how packed fight scenes were anyway, that might have explodicated the computer.

Good work!

bring marco back will you, save him, it is not right save him

*Breaks out in huge heaving sobs* It's OVER? NO! Hem. I loved this stories and just speechless. Your original characters flowed so well with the rest and it was just... amazing. I can't wait to check out the rest of your stories as soon as I'm done mourning the end of this one! Great job and keep up the great work!

:oP

Great story. I loved it, from the Larynia/Marco to all the time matrix stuff. I read this after I read the Kelbrid Wars, which I'd like you to update. Great writing. I love happy endings.

I have to say, that was an awesome story

Took a few days to read becuase it was finished by the time I started it, but I loved it all the way through.

I do have one question though... What happened to the older versions of the animorphs. You probebly answered this, but I didn't read well enough.

Other than a few continuity errors, this was a very good piece of literature.

great, im not going to review untill the end though cause i want to read

nice again

good or bad lol

i liked the story AlOt

Just a question: Marco and larynia are married and have kids,... but Marco is still human... and they have andalite kids...HAHAHAHAAHHA. two hours at a time in bed! ahahahhaahahahhah! frig that's funny.

This was an excellent story! It must've been hard to write, with all the time twists and everything, but you really thought it out! I admire your writing!

Any chance of a sequel? Haha, no need to, but i'm going to miss reading the story...maybe i should read it again!

U RULE! BEST STORY I'VE READ! U CAN COMPETE WITH KAA!

When you wrote ' Her blade swooped playfully through the air as she pulled away, rearing up on her hind legs and laughed. ' It's called a FORSIL maneuver.

hey you forgot to ask for reviews

um... cool

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:)

(this counts as 1 million reviews) wow!