love it

why do they all have to fight with swords and daggers? i understand that they can't use magic, but why can't they use machine guns or something that might even the odds? they're wizards (and witches)- i'm sure they could find a way to steal them or something. if not machine guns because they are too dangerous for teenagers or because things like them don't work around all the magic at hogwarts couldn't they make them work like collin did with his camera or use rifles or something? i'm sure that in 2 months they could learn to be safe and/or accurate and that at least some of the muggleborns would already know how to shoot. that's all i have to say-- scratch that, ask. i don't really expect a response, i just wanted to speak those things someone that actally might listen to those questions because my brother sure won't.

it wazz good i liked it luved it really nice work!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

OMG i loved that so much, it was great so glad you put in daniel bedingfield gotta love him
luv
jade :)

Well, that was quite long for an epilogue, but good nonetheless. The story shows a lot of promise for you as a writer.

Not a bad chapter. Hermione was being a bit irrational in that first part, but with all the stuff she went through in this story, I suppose one would be pretty irrational. Though, I like the fact that they didn't truly get together until the end.

An unusual way to end their relationship. I especially found this part oddly amusing:

"You're still in love with him."

Hermione was taken aback by this simple statement, "What?"

"You heard me. You're still in love with him."

"Who?"

"God Hermione! Who do you think? Draco Malfoy, King of the Slytherins, Prince of Purebloods, Lord of all that is evil, vile, and wrong in the world, whom, might I remind you, has called you Mudblood countless times! You know, for the smartest witch in our class and as a sorceress, you sure can be daft!"

You have a very unique writing style.

I like this chapter. As strange as it seems you do well with odd and quirky scenes that a lot of writers in the Harry Potter fanfiction realm seem to have a hard time writing.

I was a bit confused in the fact that you said Voldemort was already killed and then you had Harry killing him again while Draco was fighting his father... unless of course it was a time lapse that was unlabled. I like how you described the fighting. You did well with the emotions and artistic nature behind it.

Talk about unexpected... why would you put Blaise on the good side in Hermione's group no less? I'm glad you brought the Weasley's back... again. And you followed the fact that Harry and Ginny should end up together.

This chapter was very disappointing to me. Why would someone not remember their daughter said she was raped, even if it was only mentioned in passing and what kind of mother wouldn't be more concerned about it? I'm learning that you as a writer do very unexpected things so I'm going to continue even though my normal insticts would tell me to just drop the story.

I was kind of anticipating a chapter that would wind up like this. I think Hermione seems very out of character, I mean, I know she's been sexually assaulted more times than I would care to think of, but she's lost any and all of her usual intuitive intelligence.

I really like how you portray the forceful Draco better than the sweet one. Justin to me shows all the signs of an abusive partner the way you've written him, but that's just a feeling I have.

Fascinating... it would seem Draco really does care for her. Though I have to wonder why Sirius didn't jump more at the fact that she'd been raped.