pretty good, keep it up

hey men this fic is fantastic i mean how you put it in whit rei having all of the memoris of rei 1 and rei 2 and also misato heping and investigating about seele and all the other things is trully ginus and i think that i speak for all the other readers PLEASE UPDATE SON. And thank for a grat fic. so please put up the other chapters as soon as posible.

then please update

update

Yes, you must continue! This is a great story! Very romantic and I like that between Shinji and Rei.
Need to have them kiss thought. And screw with Gendo, make him suffer!
Anyway, keep up the good work!

Yea-good story hope to see another chapter soon.

DC

This seems like a nice story it’s interesting how you have handled Rei.

DC

I can't wait for the next chapter!

u didnt update 4 3 years and this wasnt that long, u nitwitted baka

Your dialogue needs work. Otherwise, your structure is sound.

But your dialogue...when you write, think of it as you having a conversation with someone...and what it would sound like to say those things out loud.

The way it is right now...your story line is very good, your descriptive writing is very good, and your structure is excellent.

But your character dialogue is so poor, I lost interest almost immediately.

Good work.

this fic is over do for an update please up do it soon

U HAVEN'T UPDATED THIS SINCE WUT, 2003? THAT'S 3 YEARS AGO MAN! i'm speaking in terms of just the year itself, not the whole date lol. but wut's the hold up? lack of ideas or something? well anyways, that's all from me, please update this, i really wanna know wut happens.

plus, i notice that you are either lacking, or your current prereader is taking his sweet time. if you want, i can be your prereader. i'm pretty efficent, and i can get things done within a few hours if you e-mail me at the right time, or i get can it to you in 2 days tops. but if you're all good, that's fine with me, it's just an offer.

well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers ^^ Ja ne

Wow, you're a good writer, Dennis. O_O That's cool. I've never really seen much of the show aside from a few episodes here and there and the "death and rebirth" special edition of the series. I write fanfics myself if you ever want to read some sometime. O:D I usually write long stories though, get too into the plots, heh. Check em out and tell me what you think! ^.^ I could write so many more stories if only I had the time to...T_T

very good, keep it up, I wan't another chapter up soon.