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| Hope and love 2008-08-25 ch 4, | abusei love it! Update Soon! |
| glennscm 2006-09-12 ch 4, | abusei like it so far, please continue it |
| PyroChic101 2006-05-01 ch 4, | abuseI like it so far. I can't wait to see what happens... If Cameron will talk to Logan or not and if she will start at the school. Maybe she runs away...lol Can't wait to find out! |
| David 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon. | abusegot quite involved going through the chapters please keep writting want to know what happens to Cam & Logan |
| Allie De Capria 2006-04-09 ch 3, anon. | abuseI think for the next chapter youshould have Ashlee wake up, see her father, train with the X-men adn hunt down and kill the rest tof the poeple who killed her mother and experimented on her. But that's own very violent opinon. |
| crystalfeathers 2006-03-20 ch 3, | abuseI do hope you update more frequently than once a year like you have been. I sure hope so. ^_^ |
| The Dark Feline 2006-03-15 ch 3, | abuseIts really good |
| Dory Shotgun 2006-03-12 ch 3, anon. | abusegood stuff... maybe you could make her scared of him and she runs away... ectera ectera i'll leave that bit to you or she could hate him... or she could try to kill him for leaving her... that might be the way she see's it... i don't know it's up to you |
| Aimed mischief 2006-02-25 ch 2, | abuseWow! Awesome work mate!! I totally loved it!! A little short, but short chappies is fine by me...=) Keep it up and have fun!! Izzy |
| katsunie 2006-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease finish this story and i would like to see how you plan to continue this story |
| safarigirl83 2005-11-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really interesting story. I'm sorry to see you haven't updated in a long time. I'm interested in seeing what will happen when Logan and his daughter are reunited. Sounds like she has some pretty cool mutant powers, too. Hope to see some more from this story in the future. |
| SG-Fan 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI've only seen the sketchiest amount of X-Men but I like to read the fictions about it... (well, I'm what, three weeks late in reviewing?) Anyways, this is good. Are you adding more? Please do... |
| Aimed mischief 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseI love it! It's so fun to think of Logan as a really sweet father, it's so...,well..., sweet! I can't wait for chapter two to come! Is Logan and Scott related since Ashlee's mother's last name was Summers? |
| maltese-princess 2004-09-01 ch 1, | abusethanks so much for your review it means alot to me that u accually reviewed again on my story thanks so much i accually read your xmen story not bad im not much of a Xmen fan so i wasnt to sure what was goin on from the story but it sounded good aways. take care thanks so much for reviewing ciao |
| Seul Desir 2004-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI don't think my review went through, so I'll try again... I think this story has potential. Looks like you haven't updated in a while though. Hopefully, you will continue the story cause I want to see how you lay out the plot! (FYI- "serubo" = Cerebro) Anyway, I hope you come back with an update! Cya. |