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| Reyavie 2006-03-03 ch 13,  | abuseAlright! I finally managed to read it all. Yes, it does sound sad that I took almost a week to do it but alas I can be very lazy. Anyway I really enjoyed it, most of the stories that speak of another item destroy the whole thing by dropping the item out of nowhere and you managed to go around that little problem. Very well written and with a solid plot...of course, if I had been following this from the beginning, I would have had a dozen or so heart attacks with the cliffhangers you seem to be quite fond of. But I didn't so you are forgiven *receives weird looks* Just kidding ^_^ By the way I really pity Theoris. It wasn't enough the poor guy passed through all of that, his family was wiped out. But I'm now curious and, as I'm not a cat, I shall read the rest. |
| Mira 2004-05-09 ch 13, anon. | abuseHow sad that Theoris's line died out so quickly. I do look forward to seeing what happens with him and the Millennium Shield in Intertwined Fates. |
| Mira 2004-05-09 ch 12, anon. | abusePoor Theoris! I'm glad I read this. |
| Mira 2004-05-09 ch 11, anon. | abuse*glares* Evil...simply evil... |
| Mira 2004-05-09 ch 9, anon. | abuseAnd now another person who has seen inside Theoris. Adjedaa still reminds me of Monica. |
| Mira 2004-05-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseHm...a little fishy with the cool guy vanishing like that. I doubt he's got a good ending. |
| Mira 2004-05-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseI like Akunosh. I really do. He seems like a nice guy! |
| Mira 2004-05-09 ch 6, anon. | abusePoor Millennium Rod spirit! I'll stay with you! |
| Mira 2004-05-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseAdjedaa reminds me of Monica. Just...fyi... |
| Mira 2004-05-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseI'm enjoying the manner you have everyone speaking in. It's very time periodish. |
| Mira 2004-05-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseI figured, I read the sequel, I may as well figure out what happened first! Poor Theoris! |
| The Viking Sheep 2004-04-10 ch 13, anon. | abuse*raves like a pointy chicken* This is the most luvverly Yu-gi-oh story I have read that did not contain an actual card duel. Good characters. |
| ray 2004-03-11 ch 8, anon. | abusepretty good stuff. I'm impressed |
| Monica!! 2003-09-29 ch 13, anon. | abusehey! wow! story is muy excellente! also, your title for the next story is GREAT! you brilliant child! hehe, well, maybe not a child anymore, Mr. College. hehehehe anyway, i loved the way you ended this story... anyway, i think you did one of the best jobs i've ever seen in not-letting-me-guess-what's-going-to-happen! I seriously had no idea how the Millennium Shield was going to survive that last part. (even though i just made absolutely up there, sorry!!) anyway, i've gotta run, but you know i'll be wait for the next story! please e-mail me when you get it al ready!! :-D ok, now i'm really leaving! bye friend! |
| The Leaky Pen 2003-09-28 ch 13, | abuseAs the Millenium Shield waits, so do I. I wait.. and I wait.. a millenia will pass in a day, and behold.. Fates are intertwined as only stories can make them. And so I wait... watching and waiting for the right moment, when I am to click a certain button, and press a certain key, and all will become clear. Kudos to you, my friend. And Merry writing... |