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jennied
2006-10-17 . chapter 13
It's official this one is definetly my favourite in the trilogy lol!
I loved the twist with Janice and Emily, i really like how you've written them in this fic, they got a raw deal on the show but Emily was only a ** after Ross ruined what should have been the happiest day of her life. She was a very likeable character before then.
Poor Ross, he doesn't have much luck with the women, but i always thought Julie was a good match for him and it was a good idea to bring her back to give him someone to love.
I really liked how you had the group move on and grow up but you know that they'll still always be friends, especially with Monica having Chandler's baby.
I always thought Chandler would have made a great sitcom writer so kudos there lol!
Anyway you are a great writer and you've done a fab job here!
Are We Human
2005-10-10 . chapter 1
I loved this, you know every character so well.
Natalie Jacobson
2003-10-30 . chapter 13
It's been a while since I've spent the time to read a fan fic. I've enjoyed reading this and would love to see you continue it.
Cress
2003-10-27 . chapter 13
Are the rules about bridesmaids that strict? If female friends are married, can't they take the title of matron of honor or something like that? And Since Emily and Janice are divorced rather than married now, I don't see why they can't be bridesmaids. It should be up to the bride to choose what friend(s) or relative(s) she wants to be an attendant at her wedding. Outdated traditions need not get in the way, or there would be no such thing as a lesbian wedding in the first place.

It's nice to know that a new group is forming, and that the original six will remain close friends, despite living far apart from each other. But I think you kind of overdid it on the literary quotations. It feels artificial and vaguely pompous for the friends to keep lacing their conversation with quotes, even if they are intelligent and well educated. Oh, and David is a physicist, not a mathematician, though the two are easily confused because a lot of advanced math is required in physics. But David clearly was talking about particle accelerators in TOW The Monkey, making him a physicist.
Lindsey2
2003-10-27 . chapter 13
great stuff! It was a nice ending, not overly sweet but happy. :) though one thing, I think David was more of a nuclear physician/scientist than a mathmetician, unless that was your intention to change the title, but anyway I can't wait to see your new fanfics in the future!
Lucy H
2003-10-12 . chapter 12
Aw, they're going away? Hm, sad as that development was, it's an amazing story!
Cress
2003-10-08 . chapter 12
Yea! What a great chapter. Now we just need to see the babies born and everybody will have a happy ending!
Cress
2003-09-29 . chapter 11
I'm not sure what you mean when Monica and Ross refer to their parents yelling at each other. Jack and Judy Geller are usually seen as being very affectionate and tolerant to each other. (They probably do fight sometimes, but we've not seen any yelling between them yet, whereas we've seen yelling and even hitting between Monica/Rachel as roommates.) I think Rachel's parents the Greens bicker so much because they didn't love each other and were unhappy, and tried to distract themselves with outside hobbies like his boat and her pottery classes. But you may be right about the incident in Hawaii. After your author's note, I was disappointed to still see nothing from Chandler, Joey, and Kathy again. It's like your chapters only star Monica, Rachel, Emily, Janice, and Ross, and everyone else is just an extra who appears in the background but says and does nothing.
Lindsey2
2003-09-29 . chapter 11
hi I know I haven't reviewed this fanfic before now, but I thought you might know that I'm a fan of yours, you know my enthusiasm for your western fics :) I also like how in THIS series, you include past characters like Janice and Emily - whom I'm sure would actually be quite likeable if the writers hadn't turned her into a 'evil' ross-and-rachel complication.
would LOVE to see her parents in a fanfic sometime too, saunders and conti were brilliant.
Lucy H
2003-09-26 . chapter 10
OOh, this is great!
Cress
2003-09-25 . chapter 10
I'm glad that you slowed down the Ross/Julie thing some. The fact that all the women are getting together to plan things out seems a little too much, though. They are all talking ABOUT Ross, but we don't see much from his point of view. And I notice that Joey, Chandler, and Kathy are still being neglected. If they don't have much to contribute to the plot anymore, can there at least be some funny jokes and scenes with them?
Lucy H
2003-09-22 . chapter 9
Wow, it's amazing! (as always, hehe)
Cress
2003-09-16 . chapter 9
It's sad that Ross loses yet another woman. If only they wouldn't fight so much. How can Monica and Rachel say they never fight or at least never get "mad"? Healthy couples should fight and not be so lovey-dovey all the time.
Lucy H
2003-09-09 . chapter 8
Wows, this is great as always!
Cress
2003-09-09 . chapter 8
So Joey's back to his old self, huh? But how will Ross and Phoebe turn out? Post your next chapter as soon as you can.
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