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| Melissa 2006-09-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseYou really should warn that the story is AU. ELROND DOES NOT DIE! Sorry I just hate storys that have things like that and don't even warn you of character death. |
| Estel-hopeofmen 2006-08-02 ch 4,  | abusewhat the...? I was not expecting that...after he was told Elrond died I expected him waking out of a dream. btw Estel was told when he was 20. just in case ya did not know. do me a favour...have Estel wake up! otherwise, who would stop him from marrying arwen right away? ^ ^ |
| Catmint 2004-02-20 ch 4, | abuseThis is OK, but there are a few phrases that really grate - slang terms and 'modern' words really don't fit into Tolkien's world. |
| Cassandra Halfelven 2003-09-20 ch 4, | abuseSo sad, why did u kill Elrond, did he really die ir what? please tell us, oh its killing me! |
| Mad Wolf 2003-09-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseI truthfully that Estel's argument would have caused Elrond death. Seriously, I mean I have said "I hate you" to my mother plenty of times and she hasen't died or even start to cry. She just yells back at me. So, it it kind of unreal, it wouldn't have broken his heart, for if he saw Celebrian leave to the Grey Havens, that would have hurt him more that Estel saying that he hates him, but still, I have to say that I am enjoying your story anyway! |
| telegramsam 2003-08-09 ch 4, | abuseSo, uh, when you gonna update this thing? |
| leggylover03 2003-08-03 ch 4, | abusekeep up the good work |
| Alexis 2003-08-02 ch 4, anon. | abuse*stares at screen and whimpers* Elrond dead? *stares, tears running down her cheeks* NO!! Poor Estel. No dead ada. bring him back! Write more and bring him back *thanks for listening to the insanity,(translation): great story, I would love for you to write more* |
| leggylover03 2003-07-27 ch 3, | abuseYAY! good chapter but poor Elrond and kill that wench Gilarean and give Estel many boo boos. Update soon |
| Amananduniel Black 2003-07-26 ch 3, | abuseaw Elrond, i wana give him loadsa loadsa hugs! nasty lil Estel... evil Gilaren.. so what if hes her child? pah! a slightly different view, i realise, but change is good right? right? nehoo, very very very good, and i expect more son! |
| Made of Stardust 2003-07-26 ch 3, | abuseI've just read all three of these short chaps here, and 1) Thank you for making them short. For once, reading on a comp screen HASN'T given me a headache! 2) A bit of constructive criti. here - the dialogue. I want to be able to really get INTO a fic, you know? And one of the things that makes that easier is having dialogue that corresponds more with Tolkiens style. Although, it is your fic, so the dialogue reflects you, also... Anyway, the short and short here is: write some more, please! |
| ShadowGraffiti 2003-07-26 ch 3, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SERVE'S ELROND RIGHT! But wait… I was very confused at the end when you threw in some person named Eddy. I kind of figured Eddy was Estel, but… nep! Alenya: Nep? Me: You dare question me? Alenya: *hides* Still, that is really… uh, wow… i wish i'd come up with an idea like this… wow… ur good! *sniffs* *blinks back tear* But… but… but… *bursts out sobbing* THERE'S NO FRODO! T-T Alenya: Feel free to ignore the obsessed freak… Me: *whacks with frying pan* I'd prefer 'dedicated fan' and 'dork', thank you!! Alenya: So… Feel free to ignore the dedicated fan dork…? Me: Do you enjoy getting whacked with a frying pan?? Alenya: No, wh- *gets whacked with frying pan* Oh, that's why… *falls over* Please update soon! And please e-mail me at ShadowGraffiti@aol.com when you do… I'd put this on my favorites, but my list is full… ^_^; whoops! -Piper (dA HyPeR OnE) |
| ShadowGraffiti 2003-07-26 ch 2, | abuseOh, who's the lady? I don't like her. Too mysterious. Scary *cringes* Alenya: *wakes up* Me: *twitching* Alenya: What's ur problem?? Me: QUIET YOU! *whacks with frying pan* *returns to twitching* Alenya: *holding head* My head… *passes out* -Piper (dA HyPeR OnE) |
| ShadowGraffiti 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThe arrow will hit! IT WILL! I'm going to the next chappy now! -Piper (dA HyPeR OnE) |
| Alexis 2003-07-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseOkay who is this chica? Please write more soon, kay? |