Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Gloaming - Page 1 of 5
fugu
2006-04-27 . chapter 4
Your story is perfection, just absolute perfection.
How do you come up with these things? It's insane.
It makes me aware of my body, makes me feel human.

Yeah, this story is incredibly human.

btw. if you want to use french in any of your other writtings, feel free to mail me.I'm a native speaker and there's nothing that wrankles me more than reading a wonderfully written and well developed story in english and then have the characters speak bad french. For a moment it kills the suspension of disbelief. lol
Xlayer
2006-01-25 . chapter 4
Good Lord...You are brilliant...that is all I come up for the fabulous story that you have weaved with its strains of darkness and light, oblivion and realization...You are brilliant.

Keep Writing,
- X.
MPS
2005-03-04 . chapter 1
Well, like I said; no self control. I'm reading the sequel. I'll leave a proper review at the end. This is just to say, if you ever feel the inclination to review your story, Arienette's french isn't really right. (neighter is Snape's but that's ok as he said so). Well actually , there is only one phrase that is off. The «Ne me pensez pas ne voient pas où ceci va». If you meant her to say«Don't think I don't know where this is going» then have her say «Ne pensez pas que je ne vois pas où ceci va». It is also slightly weird that she uses vous to snape.
Skylar
2005-01-27 . chapter 4
Needless to say that you writing has left me speechless, yet again. I'm at a loss of words, my heart is pounding in my chest just thinking about what you have written.

I can't possibly think of anything to say about how wonderful this story is, because there isn't a word in the english language to fully describe how brilliant your stories are.
SeparatriX
2004-11-06 . chapter 4
"Say good-bye on a night like this
If it's the last thing we ever do
You never looked as lost as this
Sometimes it doesn't even look like you
It goes dark
It goes darker still
Please stay
But I watch you like I'm made of stone
As you walk away..."

Brilliant story..can't wait to see the next one.
nepenthene
2004-10-07 . chapter 4
These two stories were incredibly good. I wouldn't mind seeing more set in this universe if you ever got the urge to write about it again.
padfootfe
2004-05-30 . chapter 4
Even better than the first. Once again I'm crying and don't know why. Your story is touching, sad, deep...ect. I could go on thats how i feel about it. Shame though that they didn't stay together. Oh well time to move on and i'm glad he's not depressed anymore.
FitzChivalry
2004-05-19 . chapter 4
Yeah!! a sequel is in the works. I can't wait. I have so many desires in regard to what you might do; however, I know it is not right to influence a writer. Anything you write will be an amazing journey.
Rissa Potter
2004-03-13 . chapter 4
I am so excited about a sequel. Will Harry totally fall for Alarbus? Will Al feel 'something' stops Harry from loving him? Will Ron take sides and whose? Will Severus allow it to go on without trying his mind games? He let Harry go, but somehow I think he really is obssessive. Can there be a middle ground where an auror and a death eater (serial killer?) can find happiness?
RhiandraChristine
2004-03-09 . chapter 1
Yeah! Thanks, Armand. I can't wait. I will make sure to tell the yahoo groups when I see your update.
Thanks again.
Lexxie
2004-03-08 . chapter 3
**Clapping Hands and Cheering**
Thank you, thank you, Armand.
Did everyone hear that?! We are going to get more! Yes!
I will patiently await; real life is a priority. I am glad you are writing and thinking of a sequel.
Armand Malfoy
2004-03-07 . chapter 4
At the request of Lexxie(and because I managed
to get out of bed early this morning):
Hi everyone! *waves*
Some of you have said that you'd like to see more
of this fic. I have to apologise, because I did
mean for it to be part of a trilogy. The past few
months have been REALLY busy (and I doubt if
things are going to be much easier any time soon)
but I've started writing again anyway. Things are
moving slowly, but there is a general plot out-
line for a third and final piece, titled
"Schadenfreude." Updates will be
sporadically posted on my livejournal,
w.livejournal.com/users/lixtetrax.
In the mean time, there will probably be a few
shorter, non-Lachrymose pieces. I'm working on
a BIG Snape/Harry project, but don't expect it
anytime soon. ;) Finishing this series is top
priority for the time being.
As always, thanks for reading. Have a great day!
~Armand
Lexxie
2004-03-07 . chapter 4
Armand,
Please think about continuing this story. I still check almost daily hoping you would do more with the Lachrymose universe. Could you leave a review note here telling us what you feel about that?
Thanks,
Lexxie
Mabish
2004-02-16 . chapter 4
These stories have utterly broken my heart. Your writing is gorgeous and the plot is so twisted and rather sick. It's perfect.
I agree that you can't leave it here, there is just too much left unsaid. Don't leave me to my assumptions that Harry is telling himself tales. Because, I don't think he could really love Alarbus, not on par with Snape at least.
Simply fantastic. You have me hooked.
enahma
2004-01-23 . chapter 4
Absolutely unique, enchanting, but sorrowful.
And you cannot decide (even if Harry lulls himself into certain beliefs because of his love) whether to believe Severus or not.
You know, these two stories were just... absolutely different from the majority of the ffs you can read here (mine included, hehehe) - and well... first I didn't want to read, but somehow I began and later I just couldn't finish.
I don't even understand why NOW. I've been reading stories on ff.net for two years or more so. And lo! In one of my hours of absolute boredom I came across with them - and I liked them a lot.
Dunno what else to say. There are just too many things I should mention here - but it's so hard to collect myself enough to write a normal review. Rather I add you to my favs and alert lists and I hope that once, I will meet your stories again.
With sincere respect,
Enahma
Return to Top