this is one of a kind. very good.

WOW

You should have had Jake spring across and Wipe Visser Three and shake him and eat him and bite him and... okay nevermind. NEET ::poof::

kay, thats was good Jenni, I thought you liked Quan and Marco more, where did the whole Jake thing come from?

Interesting...reminds me of the Ellimist and Crayak.

Bravo. And hey, don't be afraid to post romance. Especially J/C. People don't seem to write much for them anymore (actually they never really did...lol.)

Good one. liked the idea... the language was great. expressive

I like this story. It's pretty good. And extremely original. Maybe I should try writing late at night . . . But anyway, it has good spelling and grammar, a good plot, well-fleshed-out original characters, and a good style of writing. All in all I'd say a 9.5 of 10. The lost .5 is mostly because I reserve 10's for the perfect fics. No offense, this one just isn't the kind that you really remember, y'know? :) Good fic though. _ KittenGirl555

Coolness!

cool! I liked that alot. well written, emotional. very good!