great poem! Really dark and edgy- I love it! Hurray for people who write poems about suicide! :)

Wow...I'm speechless...That was great. You're a *really* great writer!! Not much else to say really...ciao!

*~Cassandrah~*

This is going on my favorites list need i say more?

cool poem, nicely written. ^_~

I have no more sympathy for those who take their own life. Just one less fool competing for my air.
But you, Toni, are not quite a fool. You have a gift, and I do not mean your poetry. You have the capacity to love, and that is very rare in our generation. Take people like me, who have killed their emotions, given too much of their mind and body in the pursuit of truth and self-enlightenment.

There is...no person out there who has the worth...to make you want to end it all. Simple as that. Love is all well and good, but it is not all-consuming unless you want it to be.

Ah, well. You'll tell yourself that I don't know you, that I don't know what you've been through, that I don't know how much you loved him. And you'll dismiss this all as the ramblings of someone with an odd nickname and continue on with your life.

As always, Peace.
The TickTockMan

Hey great poem!

wow. i have written about two poems on suicide.

YOur poem really tells how suicide is about when your alone and its when you will attepmt it. awseome poem!