OO OO what happened, what happened? I've been waiting so long for an update- and you leave me hanging. But that's ok 'cause this story is great!

The chapter was great and I loved how you ended it. Comical, absolutely comical!

I like first-person perspective stories. It's fun getting into the minds of those you are writing about.

The story was good. I can imagine how Zoisite felt when he was at the party among most of those women. And it left me curious as to what happened after Zoisite fell on the pavement.

I have nothing negative to say about this story, especially since it's just beginning.

I think that you should continue it. I would love to see more added on to this story.

Sakura the Cookie Monster