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Mighty Lord Moldy-Shorts
2007-04-29 . chapter 6
Um...er...o.o

Number one: Don't EVER, I repeat, EVER use chatspeak in your stories. You have no idea how horrible it looks.

Number two: It's kind of vain to name characters directly after yourself...

Number three: Somehow I doubt that the -entire- Divination class aside from the Marauders, Lily and her friends would be out sick with the flu. Madame Pomfrey would be able to fix them in about two seconds anyway.

Number four: You showed next to nothing of the real-time students' reactions to their futures. You'd think that James, Lily, Sirius, Momo, and Kayz would be a bit traumatized by their deaths; Remus would be as well, considering that she wouldn't let them see it.

So, all in all, this is a rather crappy storry. Sorry.
Dark and prone to violence
2003-10-18 . chapter 6
That was...nice...
*sniff* *sniff*
OH I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! I DON'T WANT REMUS TO DIE!

*runs off balling*
Rowlingfan
2003-08-04 . chapter 4
:D
Rowlingfan
2003-07-25 . chapter 3
great story. i applaud your work!
Rowlingfan
2003-07-22 . chapter 2
please, momo, please, gimme more chappies!
EvilMicella
2003-07-21 . chapter 2
O, u and Sirius are gunna get it on!! ..I'm so inappropriet for my age..GET UPDATING. Don't be like, update this thing! lol. hahahahahahahahaha..I mean it...hehe
EvilMicella
2003-07-21 . chapter 1
STUPID, I TELL U, lol, jk. kewlio! mwahaha..UPDATE ASAP, BISH! hehe
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