Hey I like this fic. I'm hoping that there's more. You do well with the crossover time periods and everything. Can't wait to read more.

can we say "stupid boys"? (no offense to any male readers)
duh Van! they're fighting over YOU! because the Priestess loves you and because Celena is a spoiled PIG that just wants the throne. (at least that's what I think ;))
*pokes at Ambers*
*hugs*
write more soon!

cool

I love, love, love, love, love your story!

YOu know it might be a good thing but sometimes you're writing is a little hard to follow.
You did a good chapter this time. I was slightly confused because it's either set in the future or in the past but I believe that it was in the past that it is set. As for Celena and the priestess hating each other I can understand why. It sounds like he's in love with the priestess though. Also sounds like he has slept with her but then again I could be wrong.
Oh and last time I checked Van was catching a falling Hitmomi from the sky. I don't believe she was conscious either. I could see where this would be a vision of the story then. I look forward to the next chapter of this story. YOu did a good job. I just have one request though. Please, please, update sooner! I'm on my hands and knees begging! Arigato and ja ne!

Damn...that was a nice chapter! Thanks for doing a chapter in the King's POV. It was a nice change...i'll leave a better review in the near time future since I have to leave my comp rite now...thanks for updating and have a nice day!

Hey whats up? I was reading your story after like months of not even looking at it and I realized something. You haven't updated for a while. It's been almost one whole month since you did and I was wondering when you think you were going to update again.
Ok, now onto the story. I totally love it. It's so fantastic! I just want you do one tiny, little thing. You "Van" from Atlantis, right. (Well of course you do, you invented him) Anyways...do you think you could explain his feelings about the Priestess "Hitomi". I know the Priestess "Hitomi" is confused about these new feelings inside of her but I think the King "Van" is letting on more than what he seems about her. So could you please clarify that.
THANKS A BUNCH!

Love your faithful and loyal reader,

I like this story. I actually found it this morning. I am home alone all today and late into the night because my parents went away, so now I am going to read alot of fanfiction today, lol. Anyways, please update soon. I like this story. I like this so much its going on my favorite stories lists. LOL, and the author alert thinger too.
Hurry up and update.
Smiles-Hugs,
Gwuinivyre

O.O
so does Hitomi have those other-world garments on when she meets Van? *winks and begs for the answer*
hah! I spotted a mistake! lol.
you forgot? you FORGOT? about this story? oh my. O_O
write more soon!

Yay! Van and hitomi are finally back together again!! *jumps around happily* What is going to happen next? What exactly is going on between the priestress and the king right now? The priestress must be very confused and the king, well I think he is having second thoughts about that marriage of his *lol*. PLEASE GO ON ASAP!

WHAT! I SHOULD HAVE E-MAILED YOU LIKE I WAS PLANNING TO A MONTH AGO! I JUST THOUGHT YOU WERE BHUSY GETTING READY FOS CHRISTMAS AND EXAMS! SO I LEFT YOU ALONE!
You did a good job! I like how she landed in his arms while he was flying. I can't wait to see what happens next. Does she wake up and think that she is in a vision as she was when whe was on the track? Does Merle seem to think that something is up? She always seemed to have a sixth sense when something out of the ordinary starts to show. Come to think of it you haven't mentioned her at all. I look forward to reading what you do next! Arigato and ja ne!

Yay an update! I was almost afraid that you discontinued the story. Though the chapter is a little shorter than the others it was well worth the wait. Thanks for such a great read!

HI!! You updated!! *wootwoot* BTW, I like the line where Van said he would not let Old farts run his country...HAHAHA. That was funny. And that line where Van said "There's no use is attempting to override my decision. I am kind, and you are NOT." THAT WAS COLD!! Like ice baby!! But, that was a grammar mistake because you shouldn't put "is" since "There's" in that statement is actually the contraction for "There is" and thus, you put "is" twice even though you really don't have too...The part of how Van thought of his beloved was sweet too...fluff is always good...and I especially like the way you write your fluff...you do it well..DUDE..the end was a total cliffhanger!! Anyway, just loved the new chap and can't wait to see the next one! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! DON'T FORGET ABOUT US "LITTLE" PEOPLE!! Lol..jk...but do please update soon..and have a wonderful day!

Luv it! Is the old king marring Celena a sing of something to come for Van? I hope not. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!

DUDE! How sad...the priestess *hearts* the king, the king *sorta hearts* Celena and/or Hitomi..man am I confused...ANYWAY, I love your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter!! This story is definitely one-of-a-kind and I am totally utterly intrigued, wondering "what will happen next?" Please update soN!