Wow. Now that it's not so ridiculously late at night that my brain is actually able to appreciate the complexity of your story, I... still can't find the words for it. Incredible seems too childish, and... words are just failing here. I knew that they were all in on it to varying degrees, and I knew that the computer malfunctions were the hackers, once you kept bringing it up, but... I'm in complete and utter awe at your ability to weave this exciting, confusing, nerve-wracking and realistic plot. Much less your ability to have the GW characters both be in character and still have grown so much before/during it. Just... wow isn't good enough, but I don't know what is.

Really good so far, but I'll have to finish it later - and I'd tell you what exactly I liked, but... there's just way too much.

OH. MY. GOD.

This was brilliance ... I don't even know what to say. I spent the past 6 1/2 hours reading this story, ranted about it on my blog, cussed FF out when it went through a glitch and only loaded half of chapter 19, and positively, undoubtedly, fell in love with it.

I don't care how old this story is, it deserves the reviews it has several times over. Perfect.

Just finished reading this when i should be revising for my exam tomorrow but i just couldn't stop! Your characterisation was amazing and the plot just kept me wanting to read more and more. I also love how it all comes together at the end - just amazing! I like this story because you seem to put a lot of research into certain areas e.g. computers, hacking etc... Well done definately a brilliant story :) x

wow, this fic was just simply awesome. i lost quite a couple of hours of sleep to finish this fic in three days after work. your fic was just that addicting. i am always thrilled to find a story that involves a plot around action with romance/friendship, etc. along in the mix. and you did really good at keeping me in suspense and guessing around what will happen next. i wasn't sure at the very end what was fake and part of the teams mission and what not.

btw, i love the hackers and esp. mike & rat. their interaction was seriously entertaining. i also like your relena character. she was really cool. the heero centered POV was a good choice as well. in general i guess i liked your own charas like enny and jeet. they were great and evolved into real lovable charas to me.

hope you will write many more great fics with such awesome plots! you really have the potential becoming a real author. i mean all those details you researched for the story (e.g. guns and hacking). that was absolutely top. thanks for such a great fic!

Just finished the entire story. It was wonderful, well written, and had a good plot line. The relationship between Duo and Heero was also well done.

In reply to your pm (since this seems to be the only way I can reply...) the url you gave in your pm didn't show up. The original link you gave in the chapter was: w . sweetlysour . net / sol /
It appears that the domain has expired and the links only lead to other ads. My email is adele @ comcast . net You can reply through a pm or email me.

Again,
Great Story!
-Adele

Wow. Your story is amazing. I've only read to chapter 30 so far, but I can't get enough. The characterization is wonderful.

Oh, the website that you have listed for the full version of the chapter no longer seems to have stories listed, only advertisements. I wondering, do you have the full version posted elsewhere? Of not, perhaps you could email it to me? Let me know if you need my email.

Again, wonderful story. Your writing is lovely.
-adele19

I loved this, and I still do. Truthfully, this is a re-read, the first time being years ago when you were half-way through posting this story. It's always been on my backlist, and re-reading it today made me feel nostalgic, as this was - amidst all the beginner readers' parodies and snippet/general fics - the gem that really roped me in to the GW fandom.

For all that well-wishing is worth from a reviewer, I hope you are doing well and, if you are continuing with your creativity and writing talent outside of fandoms, all the best with your original fiction :)

perfect. PERFECT. lol, would you ever consider doing a one-shot where the pilots meet the hackers? ^_^

I KNEW IT! I haven't finished reading yet, but I just HAD to review and say... I KNEW Quatre was alive, I KNEW he was alive, I KNEW IT! This story is amazing - it started out making me so emotional I thought I'd be sick, and wanted to curl up in a ball at various points and cry about the unfair world and lost love and shattered frienships... but I knew that if you're as good as I thought you were, Quat'd be alive, and he IS! Oh, THANK YOU!

I read this over at raygunworks a year or so ago and was irked that I couldn't review it and now that I can I have no idea what to say other than this story is amazingly amazing wonderfully detailed and just... wonderful. Love love love it. I've reread it but not in its entirety, I think I actually did badly on a midterm cos I was up all night reading this fic once. I bow down to your awesome writing.

I tried to get to the website to read the NC-17 version, but it isn't working. Could you maybe send it in an e-mail or something? My e-mail is

I had no idea you were on XD I love your story, have loved it, will continue to love it forever. And I like the ending you have here. I seem to remember a much sadder ending when Sweetly Sour was still up that involved trials and possible death sentences that was never completed and had me crying like a baby for hours. But there is no such ending here. I'm glad they lived in the end. You're amazing. ^_^

woot! done! brilliant dear. and a happy; er...realistic?...ending anyway. don't need to ask for anymore than that.

seemed a bit ooc, 'character development' aside. sure the pilots would kill 6 people to end the war, but this isn't ending the war. it's just a step that doesnt' need to be taken. they don't automatically loose if they don't 'manage' to kill 6 innocent women, one of whom is family. there is something to be said for the greater good, ofcourse, but the thought of quatre pulling a trigger on his own sister? gimme a break. they are simply not that callous, as murderous as they can be, and each has a code of honor. ~shrugs~ i get that this is how you want to story to go, but it does seem very ooc, that's all. duo's exceedingly unforgiving character is another surprise.