I enjoyed your story, however you need to use quotation marks. The lack of punctuation made reading the dialogue difficult.

ROTFLMAO Mother hen patrol... oh that is hysterical. :D

Really good story. Enjoyed your writing style a lot, too.

Wonderful story and superb characterizations of all seven. I definately look forward to reading your other stories. Hope you consider writing something new.

Uoo! I am really enjoying this one. Love JD's silent support of Ezra and Vin. Loved Inez getting in a zinger at Buck. Great little touches that can seem insignificant but mean so much to making a good story great.

Wonderfully done. The whole deaf twist was quite unexpected, and I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it. Very well done.

Great story. I really enjoyed it.

I truly loved this story! I especially enjoyed the time Ezra and Vin spent together at Vin's special hideaway. A lovely telling of terrific story! Jordan

A interesting and well written story. I like how you portray the seven, especially Ezra, but also JD and the rest. How Ezra deals with being deaft and also the attemts to kill him seems very in character.

Loved it.. The writing was tight and the story flowed very well.

Wonderful addition to the ATF universe. Keep writing!

Awesome story, keep me on the edge of my seat, can't wait to read more of your stuff. Keep up the good work!

I loved your story. Very nice portrayal of Ezra as usual. I can't wait to see more from you.

Been out of town for few days but so happy to return to find more chapters. Sniff, Sniff, poor guys, I don't know who to feel more sorry for the ones in pain or the ones being driven crazy trying to watch over them. And thank you so much for giving JD a good part of this story. He's always treated like an idiot. I loved this last chapter with him finally being shown why he's on the team. As always great writing and I wouldn't be too upset if Vin has a few set backs in getting better. Looking forward to the next chapter!

This is an excellent story. I love how you've portrayed JD as a capable adult during all the drama of the attacks. And the understanding and camaraderie between Ezra and Vin is terrific. Looking forward to the next installment.