 Jaws 8/11/03 . chapter 6 Can't wait for more . . . . who's after Ezra? will they catch them in time? Up-date soon and let me know! Great story |
 Pamiekae 8/10/03 . chapter 6I knew you wouldn't disappoint me! Again each chapter is better than the last! Oh how we love to make those two suffer and drive the others crazy! You are doing a great job of showing Ezra's deafness. Looking forward to the next chapter. I have started a story that I hope you too will enjoy once I can figure out how to get it to download on to ff. |
 jaws 8/8/03 . chapter 4 Great Story, I feel another action scene coming up . . . . Are they the target? up-date soon! |
 Pamiekae 8/8/03 . chapter 4And again a chapter that can only be described as better than the last. Thank you for the look inside of Vin's private world. Something the show sadly didn't really delve into. Even though this story is set in today's time frame I always thought there was more to Vin. SO silent and strong but a softie on the inside. I sense much more is to come and looking so forward to see what you have in store for "our" guys! |
 Jaws 8/4/03 . chapter 3 Great so far, what's to come? up date soon . . . really an interesting plot idea, first of its kind. And it's a great idea too and well thought out. well can't wait for more! |
 Jaws 8/3/03 . chapter 2 I LOVE thise story, I can't wait for the next update . . . . awesome story keep up the good work! |
 Pamiekae 8/2/03 . chapter 2I'm so glad your kept going with the story! Thanks for putting lots of Vin in the 2nd chapter. Just a couple of things to think about - Ez should have some ointments that Nathan would be after him to be putting on the burns so that there is no scarring and speed up the healing. Bandages would need to be changed a couple of times a day on hands with ointment included for the burns before being rewrapped. Again, can't wait for next update! |
 Lady Chal 7/26/03 . chapter 1Excellent! Cant wait for the rest of it! |
 Pamiekae 7/26/03 . chapter 1 Love the story so far. My two favorite guys hurt. AW! Please include a little more on Vin and his injuries. PLEASE! PLEASE! PRETY PLEASE! Just a hint though as a lip reader my self, Buck with his bushy mustache would be very hard to lip read and also JD is a fast talker and that is also hard to read (This I've learned from lip reading watching the show.) Look forward to next part of story. |
 Jaws 7/22/03 . chapter 1 I really like your story, and it's Ezra based, always the best way to go. So keep up the good work, and update soon |